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Some students prefer to study and do homework alone. Others prefer to study and work on class assignments with a group of fellow students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v.2

Some students prefer to study and do homework alone. Others prefer to study and work on class assignments with a group of fellow students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 2
everyone has their own favorite study methods, and all of them have specific benefits. I am of the opinion that it is better to study alone than to study as part of a group. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. First of all, studying alone helps us to focus on specific areas of a subject that we are struggling with, rather than doing a broad overview of the subject. Diligent students always attend classes and communicate regularly with their professors and teachers, so they are constantly aware of which topics they need to focus on when they study. when people study in a group, everyone in the group has different needs, and the study session is required to touch on all of them. my own experience is a compelling example of this. As a freshman four years ago, I was not aware of the aforementioned drawback and found myself wasting my time studying in a group for an important European history exam. I knew that I really needed to focus on religious history, but sat uncomfortably through a group study session that progressed through political, cultural, scientific, literary and artistic history before touching only briefly on the issue of religion. As a result, I performed worse on the test than I would have if I had just studied alone. Furthermore, when people study in a group they are easily distracted. Many people will agree that they desire to socialize rather than study when they get together with their friends and classmates. For instance, in the group I mentioned above not only did I suffer from the fact that we only touched briefly on my problem area, but certain group members (including myself) were easily drawn off-topic. we were quick to make jokes about the material being covered, or make tenuous and meaningless connections between those topics and our own lives. Thankfully I have avoided this problem since then as I have decided to always prepare for exams by myself. In conclusion, I strongly believe that studying alone is better than studying in a group. this is because it allows me to focus on the areas that I need to, and because it helps me to avoid socializing when I should be doing real academic work.
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methods, and all of them have specific benefits. I am of the opinion that it is better to
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study
alone than to
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as part of a
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group
. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

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on specific areas of a subject that we are struggling with,
rather
than doing a broad overview of the subject. Diligent students always attend classes and communicate
regularly
with their professors and teachers,
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they are
constantly
aware of which topics they need to
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focus
on when they
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.
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when
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people
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in a
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, everyone in the
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has
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needs, and the
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session
is required
to touch on all of them.
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my
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experience is a compelling example of this. As a freshman four years ago, I was not aware of the aforementioned drawback and found myself wasting my time
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studying
in a
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for an
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important
European history exam. I knew that I
really
needed to
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focus
on religious history,
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sat
uncomfortably
through a
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session that progressed through political, cultural, scientific, literary and artistic history
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before
touching
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briefly
on the issue of religion.
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, I performed worse on the
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test
than I would have if I had
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studied alone.

Furthermore
, when
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in a
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they are
easily
distracted.
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that they desire to socialize
rather
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when they
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together with their friends and classmates.
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I mentioned above not
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did I suffer from the fact that we
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touched
briefly
on my problem area,
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certain
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members (including myself) were
easily
drawn off-topic.
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we
were quick to
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jokes about the material
being covered
, or
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make
tenuous and meaningless connections between those topics and our
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.
Thankfully
I have avoided this problem since then as I have decided to always prepare for exams by myself.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe that
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alone is better than
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studying
in a
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group
.
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this
is
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it
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on the areas that I need to, and
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it
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me to avoid socializing when I should be doing real academic work.
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IELTS essay Some students prefer to study and do homework alone. Others prefer to study and work on class assignments with a group of fellow students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
385 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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