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Some students prefer to choose universities located in big cities. Otherswould like to study in universities located in small towns. Please state youropinion and explain why. v.1

Some students prefer to choose universities located in big cities. Otherswould like to study in universities located in small towns. Please state youropinion and explain why. v. 1
Getting adequate nutrition in today`s busy life is crucial to maintain health. Nowadays people are purchasing ready-made foods rather cooking at home. It has somewhat more advantages than disadvantages which I am going to explain in this essay. Managing time in this era is a difficult task. Somewhere, some people are studying and doing jobs simultaneously, which is tough to do. Ready to eat food is like a boon to them, which saves their time and provides them needed substances like minerals, vitamins and proteins. Even a person who does not know how to cook, he/she can also use this facility to acquire nourishment. This could be so much beneficial only and only if the ready made eating items which people are having is hygiene and health. As every garden has weeds, similarly pre made foods also has a downside. A person who intakes so much food like this, he/she will get addicted to this and may end up with serious diseases because not all this type of food products are healthy. People could get lethargic by not cooking by themselves, which may reflect on their other activities too. They would become lazy in every work because they are used to get the ready-made facility. Recent research conducted by University of Alberta shows that more than 15% of people who were consuming a canned meal rely on it for their rest of life. To conclude, there are numerous advantages of eating ready to eat edible products, only if they are being used properly and in a limited manner.
Getting adequate nutrition in
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busy life is crucial to maintain health. Nowadays
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people
are purchasing ready-made
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foods
rather
cooking at home. It has somewhat more advantages than disadvantages which I am going to
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explain
in this essay.

Managing time in this era is a difficult task. Somewhere,
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some
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people
are studying and doing jobs
simultaneously
, which is tough to do. Ready to eat
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food
is like a boon to them, which saves their time and provides them needed substances like minerals, vitamins and proteins. Even a person who does not know how to cook, he/she can
also
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use
this facility to acquire nourishment. This could be
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so
much beneficial
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only
and
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only
if the
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ready made
eating items which
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people
are having is hygiene and health.

As every garden has weeds,
similarly
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pre
made
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foods
also
has a downside. A person who intakes
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so
much
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food
like this, he/she will
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get
addicted to this and may
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end
up with serious diseases
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because
not all this type of
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food
products are healthy.
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People
could
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get
lethargic by not cooking by themselves, which may reflect on their other activities too. They would become lazy in every work
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because
they are
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used
to
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get
the ready-made facility. Recent research conducted by University of Alberta
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shows
that more than 15% of
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people
who were consuming a canned meal rely on it for their rest of life.

To conclude
, there are numerous advantages of eating ready to eat edible products,
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only
if they are being
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used
properly
and
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in a limited manner
.
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IELTS essay Some students prefer to choose universities located in big cities. Otherswould like to study in universities located in small towns. Please state youropinion and explain why. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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