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some people way that the only for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opin v.2

some people way that the only for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. 2
Nowadays the term of learning a foreign language is crucial to enter into an international environment. Therefore, there are some people claimed that traveling or working in a foreign an oversea language. On the contrary. Opponents said that is not the only one thing. Thus, this essay below will be indicated the analysis about these announcements. To begin with, I absolutely agree that we should study a vernacular language of a country where we travel or work at. Due to every one know obviously the main role of language when live abroad. For instance, Ho Chi Minh president of Vietnam while he was on the route to find way to release his country that he learned this country’s dialect. Because he perceived without local language he could not cope with various life problems, much less connect a secret network with others. As a result, learning a foreign language surely the first imperative idea when we intent to go abroad for working or travel, however, it is not the only one reason. On the other hands, there are a number of purposes for studying a new language. Theoretically, we often immerse ourselves in doing something just when we demand to understand about something. In particular, each person has own main reason such as curiosity about culture, sometime just want to sing a song in this language or even thought maybe because this language is very romantic. Thus, things are important with someone but others not. In conclusion, the reason for studying a new language versatile alter for each person’s purposes. Therefore, it is the most crucial that the reasons are suitable for their own targets.
Nowadays the term of learning a foreign
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language
is crucial to enter into an international environment.
Therefore
, there are
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some
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people
claimed that traveling or working in a foreign an oversea
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language
.
On the contrary
. Opponents said
that is
not the
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only
one thing.
Thus
, this essay below will
be indicated
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analysis about
these announcements.

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begin
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absolutely
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agree
that we should study a vernacular
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language
of a country where we travel or work at. Due to every one know
obviously
the main role of
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language
when
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live
abroad.
For instance
, Ho Chi Minh president of Vietnam while he was on the route to find way to release his country that he learned this country’s dialect.
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Because
he perceived without local
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language
he could not cope with various life problems, much less connect a secret network with others.
As a result
, learning a foreign
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language
surely
the
first
imperative
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idea
when we
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intent
to go abroad for working or travel,
however
, it is not the
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only
one reason.

On the other hands, there are a number of purposes for studying a new
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language
.
Theoretically
, we
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often
immerse ourselves in doing something
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just
when we demand to understand about something.
In particular
, each person has
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own
main reason such as curiosity about culture, sometime
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just
want to sing a song in this
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language
or even
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thought
maybe
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because
this
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language
is
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very
romantic.
Thus
, things are
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important with someone
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but
others not.

In conclusion
, the reason for studying a new
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language
versatile alter for each person’s purposes.
Therefore
, it is the most crucial that the reasons are suitable for their
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own
targets.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay some people way that the only for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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