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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 27

Over recent years, more and more people have learned the second language for many reasons. Journeying and working abroad are definitely reasonable reasons to learn a foreign language. However, there are more than two reasons as mentioned above for being bilingual or multilingual. In this essay, I will examine the other objectives of studying new languages. It is understandable why people purposes to study foreign language are for international travel and for oversea working. To be clear, in terms of travelling, people who know foreign languages have ability to communicate with local people to obtain more information about attractive destinations. Moreover, knowing other languages; especially international language could protect tourists from overpriced during the trip. The next reason is working in a foreign country, in the past few years; globalization has permitted opportunity to work abroad in many countries and broaden the huge career path to non-citizen. Hence, the more chance in working oversea makes an impact to study another language. Nevertheless, travelling and working are not the only reason for learning foreign languages. People need to learn other languages for being outstanding when they apply for a job in their own country. For instance; there a plenty of Japanese company located in Thailand and it might be a favourable circumstance if applicants are able to speak in Japanese. To summarize, travelling and working abroad are not the only reason for learning foreign languages, but also been outstanding in finding a job in hometown country and other personal reasons. Therefore, it is clear that the some people say the only reason to learn foreign languages in order to travel and work international cannot be supported. After thorough analysis of this argument, it is noticeable that people attend other languages for many reasons, not only for work or for travel.

IELTS essay Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.27

Over recent years, more and more
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people
have learned the second language for
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many
reasons. Journeying and working
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
are definitely reasonable reasons to learn a foreign language.
However
, there are more than two reasons as mentioned above for being bilingual or multilingual. In this essay, I will examine the other objectives of studying new languages. It is understandable why
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people
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purposes
to study foreign language are for international travel and for oversea working. To be
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clear
, in terms of travelling,
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people
who know foreign languages have ability to communicate with local
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people
to obtain more information about attractive destinations.
Moreover
, knowing other languages;
especially
international language could protect tourists from overpriced during the trip. The
next
reason is working in a foreign country, in the past few years; globalization has permitted opportunity to work
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abroad
in
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many
countries and broaden the huge career path to non-citizen.
Hence
, the more chance in working oversea
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makes
an impact to study another language.
Nevertheless
, travelling and working are not the
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only
reason for learning foreign languages.
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People
need to learn other languages for being outstanding when they apply for a job in their
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own
country.
For instance
; there a
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plenty
of Japanese
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company
located in Thailand and it might be a
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favourable
circumstance if applicants are able to speak in Japanese.
To summarize
, travelling and working
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abroad
are not the
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only
reason for learning foreign languages,
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but
also
been outstanding in finding a job in hometown country and other personal reasons.
Therefore
, it is
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clear
that the
Did you mean "same"?
some
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people
say the
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only
reason to learn foreign languages in order to travel and work international cannot
be supported
. After thorough analysis of this argument, it is noticeable that
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people
attend other languages for
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many
reasons, not
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only
for work or for travel.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
71Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
4 paragraphs
299 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≥ 7
  • Band score ≤ 6
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