Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinions. v.1
Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. v. 1
Nowadays, few people say that adolescents should not be given any important government job, however, other say that it would not be a bad idea if the government provide such jobs to young ones. As per me these types of jobs should be given to young, fresh people since they have higher motivation and passions to do for a country.
It has been found these days that few people think that important government positions should only be given to the experienced elders as they possess a lot training for that particular job. For example, important higher jobs require struggle which young people do not have at the beginning, however; older people gain this maturity by working a number of years in the industry. Hence therefore it is very clear that people who has background should have these types of jobs without any scrutiny.
On the other hand, it has also been found that people who are at beginner level have higher levels of motivation, passion and patriotism for their country. After graduation, many of the students want to serve their country by giving their services. For example, in China, people are given prime jobs without any scrutiny soon after graduation. Continuously, the people of Pakistan are also provided such types of jobs immediately after graduation.
In conclusion, people who have vast training deserve that jobs yet they are not able to do that important governmental job while the young people possess a higher level of motivation that they are able to perform difficult jobs. In my opinion, young people should be given an opportunity, however older should be retired after the age of 50 years.
Nowadays, few
people
say that adolescents should not be
given
any
important
government
job
,
however
, other say that it would not be a
bad
idea
if the
government
provide such
jobs
to
young
ones. As per me these types of
jobs
should be
given
to
young
, fresh
people
since they have higher motivation and passions to do for a country.
It has
been found
these days that few
people
think
that
important
government
positions should
only
be
given
to the experienced elders as they possess
a lot training
for that particular
job
.
For example
,
important
higher
jobs
require struggle which
young
people
do not have at the beginning,
however
; older
people
gain this maturity by working a number of years in the industry.
Hence
therefore
it is
very
clear
that
people
who
has
background should have these types of
jobs
without any scrutiny.
On the other hand
, it has
also
been found
that
people
who are at beginner level have higher levels of motivation, passion and patriotism for their country. After graduation,
many
of the students want to serve their country by giving their services.
For example
, in China,
people
are
given
prime
jobs
without any scrutiny
soon
after graduation.
Continuously
, the
people
of Pakistan are
also
provided such types of
jobs
immediately after graduation.
In conclusion
,
people
who have vast training deserve that
jobs
yet
they are not able to do that
important
governmental
job
while the
young
people
possess a higher level of motivation that they are able to perform difficult
jobs
. In my opinion,
young
people
should be
given
an opportunity,
however
older should
be retired
after the age of 50 years.
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