Tourism helps to bring many cultures of the world all together. Some people believe that the tourists should copy the public and their behaviours; whereas, some people think that a country should welcome diverse cultures. This essay will discuss both the views and provide evidence as to why we should greet different cultures.
Every person has a different personality; similarly, every country has its unique attributes. Imitating the culture, behaviour, habits of various tourists can lead to the demolishing of their own individuality, race, custom and history of their provenance. If the visitors start simulating the local public then there would be no virtues and traditions left of their own nation.
People coming from various countries bring different cultures to the place. Every country should respect the diversity of culture and greet them and accept them how they are. Culture is the only thing that binds the countrymen together. The varied culture leads to shaping of the society, and keeping the values of the provenance alive. Therefore, we should always welcome the differences of other countrymen.
To conclude, welcoming the guests and their diverse backgrounds and lifestyle is different and copying them and applying them to ourselves is a separate thing. Therefore, imitating the culture or the behaviour of other countries will not lead a country anywhere. That is why, each and every nation should welcome the diversity of cast, culture, race of distinctive countries. This will help our own country grow not only financially, but also expand out in development in every way.
Tourism
helps
to bring
many
cultures
of the world all together.
Some
people
believe that the tourists should copy the public and their
behaviours
; whereas,
some
people
think
that a
country
should welcome diverse
cultures
. This essay will discuss both the views and provide evidence as to why we should greet
different
cultures.
Every person has a
different
personality;
similarly
, every
country
has its unique attributes. Imitating the
culture
,
behaviour
, habits of various tourists can lead to the demolishing of their
own
individuality, race, custom and history of their provenance. If the visitors
start
simulating the local public then there would be no virtues and traditions
left
of their
own
nation.
People
coming from various
countries
bring
different
cultures
to the place. Every
country
should respect the diversity of
culture
and greet them and accept them how they are.
Culture
is the
only
thing that binds the countrymen together. The varied
culture
leads to shaping of the society, and keeping the values of the provenance alive.
Therefore
, we should always welcome the differences of other countrymen.
To conclude
, welcoming the guests and their diverse backgrounds and lifestyle is
different
and copying them and applying them to ourselves is a separate thing.
Therefore
, imitating the
culture
or the
behaviour
of other
countries
will not lead a
country
anywhere.
That is
why, each and every nation should welcome the diversity of cast,
culture
, race of distinctive
countries
. This will
help
our
own
country
grow not
only
financially
,
but
also
expand out in development in every way.
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