Some people think the teacher has greater influence than parents in the development of child 's intelligence and social skills. v.1
Some people think the teacher has greater influence than parents in the development of child 's intelligence and social skills. v. 1
There is too much debate about whether teachers or parents influence child development socially and mentally. While I agree with the idea that teachers play an indispensable role in child development, I believe that parents have a greater impact on children growing up too.
On one hand, teachers are the backbone of the education system. By this I mean that, in most countries children begin to attend school from 5 years old and from this point they emerge from the small family and join the whole society and being part of it, with the presence of professional teacher this could be a huge development in term of social skills such as teamwork and sharing activities. Moreover, through different classes in mathematics and science, for instance, children can learn how to solve a complex problem in a short time and this is the most important thing for brain development and intelligence. For illustration, it has been calculated that nearly 30% of the whole brain development takes place at this stage of our life.
On the other hand, parents and particularly mothers, as the child stays most of their time with them, play an important constituent in the growth of the child mentality. As a matter of fact, the preschool stage is a crucial stage and children obtain and store vast amounts of information. Hence, in this period children create their own environment and personality. For instance, children copy their parents in their language and how they interact with each other. Moreover, families can boost their children inelegant and cognitive skills through video games, play, interactive discussion, advice etc. As a result, the crucial role of family is not forgettable.
To conclude, as we have seen. There is no easy
There is too much debate about whether
teachers
or
parents
influence
child
development
socially
and mentally. While I
agree
with the
idea
that
teachers
play an indispensable role in
child
development
, I believe that
parents
have a greater impact on
children
growing up too.
On one hand,
teachers
are the backbone of the education system. By this I mean that, in most countries
children
begin
to attend school from 5 years
old
and from this point they emerge from the
small
family and
join
the whole society and being part of it, with the presence of professional
teacher
this could be a huge
development
in term of social
skills
such as teamwork and sharing activities.
Moreover
, through
different
classes in mathematics and science,
for instance
,
children
can learn how to solve a complex problem in a short time and this is the most
important
thing for brain
development
and intelligence.
For illustration, it has
been calculated
that
nearly
30% of the whole brain
development
takes place at this stage of our life.
On the other hand
,
parents
and
particularly
mothers, as the
child
stays most of their time with them, play an
important
constituent in the growth of the
child
mentality. As a matter of fact, the preschool stage is a crucial stage and
children
obtain and store vast amounts of information.
Hence
, in this period
children
create their
own
environment and personality.
For instance
,
children
copy their
parents
in their language and how they interact with each other.
Moreover
, families can boost their
children
inelegant and cognitive
skills
through video games, play, interactive discussion, advice etc.
As a result
, the crucial role of family is not forgettable.
To conclude
, as we have
seen
. There is no
easy
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