At the present time, people are concerned about their appearance more than in the past. Throughout history, beauty valued very high. It is believed that human beings nowadays spending more time on their outward than their ancestors did. This will be shown by taking into account comparing past and present usage of cosmetics and plastic operation in our daily life.
Firstly, usage of cosmetics was popular since the dawn of time and today's life it isn't an exception. For example, in the past people also applied a lot of cosmetics on their face to look more beautiful, despite that some of them were harmful or even dangerous for life. Nowadays we can see a similar situation, people using cosmetics in spite of that they don't really know what it contains. But in today's world, we have surgery, which can help us to dispose of from our outward shortcomings. As my example shows, there weren't any specific changes in usage but currently, we have more ways to make better our outward appearance.
In addition to this, medicine also helps us to hide our shortcomings and one of them plastic surgery operation. Changing of God-given body can be really harmful to your health and even kill you because it has some defects which cause incurable diseases like cancer and papilotomia. Therefore, doctors don't recommend you change your body or face. It's obvious from my example that people ready to all kind of pain and harm only for looking good.
Following the analysing at how people used cosmetics in the past and how they use it now, in my view, there was only little change. It has been proven that people ready to all risks just for the beautiful face.
At the present time,
people
are concerned
about their appearance more than in the
past
. Throughout history, beauty valued
very
high. It
is believed
that human beings nowadays spending more time on their outward than their ancestors did. This will
be shown
by taking into account comparing
past
and present usage of
cosmetics
and plastic operation in our daily life.
Firstly
, usage of
cosmetics
was popular since the dawn of time and
today
's life it isn't an exception.
For example
, in the
past
people
also
applied
a lot of
cosmetics
on their face to look more
beautiful
, despite that
some
of them were harmful or even
dangerous
for life. Nowadays we can
see
a similar situation,
people
using
cosmetics
in spite of
that they don't
really
know what it contains.
But
in
today
's world, we have surgery, which can
help
us to dispose of from our outward shortcomings. As my example
shows
, there weren't any specific
changes
in usage
but
currently
, we have more ways to
make
better our outward appearance.
In addition
to this, medicine
also
helps
us to
hide
our shortcomings and one of them plastic surgery operation. Changing of God-
given
body can be
really
harmful to your health and even kill you
because
it has
some
defects which cause incurable diseases like cancer and
papilotomia
.
Therefore
, doctors don't recommend you
change
your body or face. It's obvious from my example that
people
ready to all kind of pain and harm
only
for looking
good
.
Following the
analysing
at how
people
used
cosmetics
in the
past
and how they
use
it
now
, in my view, there was
only
little
change
. It has
been proven
that
people
ready to all
risks
just
for the
beautiful
face.
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