Some people think the media (including newspaper, televisions, radio, and internet sources) are less concerned with the accuracy of news. Some people think the information from the media are becoming incorrect. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion o v.1
Some people think the media (including newspaper, televisions, radio, and internet sources) are less concerned with the accuracy of news. Some people think the information from the media are becoming incorrect. with this opinion o v. 1
In this fast paced life, people become success-oriented and everyone is in the race of getting high educational qualifications. Undoubtedly, this increases the tension among the school and tertiary level students to become good competitors and therefore, students are put under a high amount of pressure to work hard at a very early age. However, as stress can be a hindrance in the overall development of any one, it certainly impacts negatively on students.
To begin with, when pupils are in pressure, they do not understand what they have learned, hence, to get a high score they generally prefer rote-learning method. Though, this method of learning may useful to get a good result, it does not make the students' basic knowledge clear. For example, to become a good engineer or a doctor, one must have a thorough understanding of any subject, which is only possible when the students' base is clear.
Moreover, school and college students are agile and impulsive. If they get a lot of burden on their shoulders, they may become aggressive and violent in several severe cases, which creates chaos in the society. Furthermore, some students cannot tolerate the burden and they end up with their lives. For instance, a study, by the Asia Education Centre, has revealed that, more than twenty percent of students attempt suicide, because of the academic pressure. So that, teachers should teach students according to their learning capacity, rather than putting pressure on them.
To conclude, as students are the future of the nation, they should be lived freely without any burden. The overall development of children can evolve them into better citizens.
In this
fast
paced life,
people
become
success-oriented and everyone is in the race of getting high educational qualifications.
Undoubtedly
, this increases the tension among the school and tertiary level
students
to
become
good
competitors and
therefore
,
students
are put
under a high amount of
pressure
to work
hard
at a
very
early age.
However
, as
stress
can be a hindrance in the
overall
development of
any one
, it
certainly
impacts
negatively
on students.
To
begin
with, when pupils are in
pressure
, they do not understand what they have learned,
hence
, to
get
a high score they
generally
prefer rote-learning method. Though, this method of learning may useful to
get
a
good
result, it does not
make
the students' basic knowledge
clear
.
For example
, to
become
a
good
engineer or a doctor, one
must
have a thorough understanding of any subject, which is
only
possible when the students' base is
clear
.
Moreover
, school and college
students
are agile and impulsive. If they
get
a lot of
burden on their shoulders, they may
become
aggressive and violent in several severe cases, which creates chaos in the society.
Furthermore
,
some
students
cannot tolerate the
burden and
they
end
up with their
lives
.
For instance
, a study, by the Asia Education
Centre
, has revealed that, more than twenty percent of
students
attempt suicide,
because
of the academic
pressure
.
So
that, teachers should teach
students
according to their learning capacity,
rather
than putting
pressure
on them.
To conclude
, as
students
are the future of the nation, they should be
lived
freely
without any burden. The
overall
development of children can evolve them into better citizens.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes