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Some people think that uniform at school is unnecessary and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree Give your opinion and examples from your own experience v.1

Some people think that uniform at school is unnecessary and should be banned Give your opinion and examples from your own experience v. 1
Nowadays, Students have to inquiry that subject which they are not like at all. According to peoples, this is a totally waste of time. But, I completely disagree with this statement because sometimes it is important to read all materials and also good for philosophy which I will discuss in further paragraphs. To initiate with, It's necessary for students to learn all subjects and also that the subjects which they dislike because each material has its own value and there is no choice for learners to read disliking subjects because these subjects are the main part of the syllabus and it is must to pass these subjects. For example, In lower classes everyone has to debate each subject and there is no option to select favourite materials. In addition to, Disliking subjects are also very knowledgeable and it is very important to read these subjects because when anybody go to crack any competitive exam then there is need to review all related topics to clear the test. Moreover, these are full of intelligence will help anybody in their future to do something big. For example, In National Defence Academy paper students have to consider all materials to pass the exam and there no favouritism of the subject is running. To conclude, Reading disliking subjects are not a waste of time, although these materials are vast of familiarity and helps anyone to increase their wisdom to clear many different exams by which everyone has to read and learn that subjects which is must for all persons.
Nowadays, Students
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inquiry that
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which they are not like at all. According to peoples, this is a
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totally waste
of time.
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But
, I completely disagree with this statement
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because
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sometimes
it is
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important
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read
all
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materials
and
also
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good
for philosophy which I will discuss in
further
paragraphs.

To initiate with, It's necessary for students to learn all
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subjects
and
also
that the
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subjects
which they dislike
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because
each
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material
has its
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own
value and there is no choice for learners to
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read
disliking
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subjects
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because
these
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subjects
are the main part of the syllabus and it is
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must to
pass these
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subjects
.
For example
, In lower classes everyone
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has to
debate each
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subject
and there is no option to select
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favourite
materials.

In addition
to, Disliking
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subjects
are
also
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very
knowledgeable and it is
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important
to
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these
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subjects
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because
when anybody
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go
to crack any competitive exam then there
is need
to review all related topics to
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clear
the
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test
.
Moreover
, these are full of intelligence will
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help
anybody in their future to do something
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big
.
For example
, In National
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Defence
Academy paper students
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have to
consider all
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materials
to pass the exam and there no
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favouritism
of the
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subject
is running.

To conclude
, Reading disliking
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subjects
are not a waste of time, although these
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materials
are vast of familiarity and
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helps
anyone to increase their wisdom to
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clear
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many
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exams by which everyone
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read
and learn that
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subjects
which is
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must
for all persons.
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IELTS essay Some people think that uniform at school is unnecessary and should be banned Give your opinion and examples from your own experience v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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