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Some poeple think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.1

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. v. 9

Well, a numebr of people thinking like teenage which give much happiness than the adult in kind of more responsibilities. According to me, I am partially agree to this statement. Because, the people in the age of 15-25 they don't have probably much responsibilities so they can live their life more happily as well as in very relaxation mode. On the other hand, when we reach the age of adult session we are in the position of good decision maker and we reanalyze the things and live more happily also. So finally, I conclude that it depending on their needs and interests to live much happily and their own individuality. Thanks and regards Yours sincerelyPraveen.

Well, a Possible spelling mistake found.number
numebr
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 thinking like teenage which give much happiness than the adult in kind of more responsibilities. This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using "in my opinion" or "I think".In my opinionI think
According to me
, I am partially
Consider using a past participle here: "agreed".agreed
agree
 to this statement.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the age of 15-25 they don't have probably
Use "many" with countable nouns.many
much
 responsibilities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 their life more happily
as well
 as in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 relaxation mode.

On the other hand
, when we reach the age of adult session we are in the position of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 decision Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).maker, and
maker and
 we reanalyze the things and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 more happily
also
.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
finally
, I conclude that Did you mean "it's depending", "it is depending", or "it was depending"?it's dependingit is dependingit was depending
it depending
 on their needs and interests to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 much happily
 and their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 individuality.

Thanks and regards

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.
sincerelyPraveen
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