Recently in certain parts of the US, adolescents have been strictly forbidden from going outside without the supervision of at least one of their parents or any other legal guardian. This kind of restriction is gaining support in some quarters. From my perspective, this practice is reasonable, and there are several compelling reasons why the youth must be accompanied by an adult when they go outdoors late at night.
First and foremost, from the perspective of road traffic safety, there are indisputable benefits which result from this kind of curfew. Those youngsters who go outdoors might get seriously injured or even killed by careless or drunk drivers at such late hours in the evening or night. Moreover, youngsters sometimes forget to pay attention to the road conditions. If an adult is present and watching out for them, it would be less likely for them to be involved in a car accident or an accidental injury.
Secondly, considering the increased possibility of encountering violence at night, the advantages of a curfew should not be overlooked. Serious crimes, such as robberies, murders, as well as kidnappings are more likely to occur at night. Thus, it makes sense to impose a night curfew on teenagers, for their own safety.
In conclusion, I am convinced that teenagers should not go out late at night unaccompanied by an adult. The increased risk of road accidents as well as the higher rate of crime and violence at night are two compelling reasons for that. 
Recently in certain parts of the US, adolescents have been  
strictly
 forbidden from going outside without the supervision of at least one of their parents or any other legal guardian. This kind of restriction is gaining support in  
some
 quarters. From my perspective, this practice is reasonable, and there are several compelling reasons why the youth  
must
  be accompanied
 by an adult when they go outdoors late at night. 
First
 and foremost, from the perspective of road traffic safety, there are indisputable benefits which result from this kind of curfew. Those youngsters who go outdoors might  
get
  seriously
 injured or even killed by careless or drunk drivers at such late hours in the evening or  
night
.  
Moreover
, youngsters  
sometimes
 forget to pay attention to the road conditions. If an adult is present and watching out for them, it would be less likely for them to  
be involved
 in a car accident or an accidental injury. 
Secondly
, considering the increased possibility of encountering violence at  
night
, the advantages of a curfew should not  
be overlooked
. Serious crimes, such as robberies, murders,  
as well
 as kidnappings are more likely to occur at  
night
.  
Thus
, it  
makes
 sense to impose a  
night
 curfew on  
teenagers
, for their  
own
 safety. 
In conclusion
, I  
am convinced
 that  
teenagers
 should not go out late at  
night
 unaccompanied by an adult. The increased  
risk
 of road accidents  
as well
 as the higher rate of crime and violence at  
night
 are two compelling reasons for that. 
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