It is argued that adolescent age is the happiest period of life while others say that adulthood carries more happiness. Although adults feel happy in their life because this age group gets the freedom to make decisions, I believe that the life of a youngster is better as they need not to worry about anything.
On the one hand, people get freedom to decide their future as and when they move to adulthood. This is because individuals can choose their career based on their own interests and preferences as parents do not prefer to interfere in their decisions during this age period. In this age, people are capable enough to make sensible decisions for their future, therefore, independent and successful decisions provide happiness and satisfaction. For example, The Times of India recently asked a number of people if they were happy to get independence to decide their career and most of the people said yes. Despite this, I believe that teenage is the best and happiest period of life
On the other hand, youngsters do not get worried about anything because the parents are there to support. Parents take care of their child's needs which can be food, study, and medicines. Therefore, teenagers rely on their parents and can enjoy their life as it comes without worrying about the future. For example, a recent study by the World Health Organisation found that people from the ages of 15-18 feel happier when compared to older age groups. I, therefore, argue that teenage life span provides more area to explore and cherish every moment.
In conclusion, although in adult years of life people can decide freely, I believe that life as a teenager is more enjoyable as parents fulfill requirements.
It
is argued
that adolescent
age
is the happiest period of
life
while others say that adulthood carries more happiness. Although adults feel happy in their
life
because
this
age
group
gets
the freedom to
make
decisions
, I believe that the
life
of a youngster is better as they need not
to worry
about anything.
On the one hand,
people
get
freedom to decide their future as and when they
move
to adulthood. This is
because
individuals can choose their career based on their
own
interests and preferences as
parents
do not prefer to interfere in their
decisions
during this
age
period. In this
age
,
people
are capable
enough
to
make
sensible
decisions
for their future,
therefore
, independent and successful
decisions
provide happiness and satisfaction.
For example
, The Times of India recently asked a number of
people
if they were happy to
get
independence to decide their career and most of the
people
said yes. Despite this, I believe that teenage is the best and happiest period of life
On the other hand
, youngsters do not
get
worried about anything
because
the
parents
are there to support.
Parents
take care of their child's needs which can be food, study, and medicines.
Therefore
,
teenagers
rely on their
parents
and can enjoy their
life
as it
comes
without worrying about the future.
For example
, a recent study by the World Health
Organisation
found that
people
from the
ages
of 15-18 feel happier when compared to older
age
groups. I,
therefore
, argue that teenage
life
span provides more area to explore and cherish every moment.
In conclusion
, although in adult years of
life
people
can decide
freely
, I believe that
life
as a
teenager
is more enjoyable as
parents
fulfill requirements.
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