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Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be waste of time. they argue that people should simply live in the moment Do you agree or disagree? v.2

Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be waste of time. they argue that people should simply live in the moment v. 2
According of certain groups of people, planning about the future is not a productive use of time. Moreover, they think that people should spend the current minute happily. I believe that thinking about the later gives individual the success, hope, motivation and self confidence. This essay would talk about how the planning for the future is not the waste of moment. Firstly, planning for the future takes a small part of an individual's day, but it is important for achieving the goal successfully. Sketching the road map in current moment would ensure that the achievement of goal without any obstacles on the way to the journey of success. For instance, if an individual wants to buy a car in the later time, he has to plan on how he is going to buy it. Furthermore, planning right ahead of the beginning an assignment would save time as people have steps in their mind on how to perform the assignment. Secondly, planning on certain tasks keeps an individual motivated and confident about the coming times. When people have set their minds to achieve something in the future, it would keep them motivated and might help them to get closer to their goal. For example, when I was younger, I used to think high school was difficult to graduate, but when I graduated from high school, it motivated and gave me the confidence to join the college. In conclusion, planning for the later at the current moment in not a waste of time. In fact, planning would not only keep individual motivated and confident, but also help them achieve the goal successfully. .
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certain groups of
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people
,
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planning
about the
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future
is not a productive
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use
of
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time
.
Moreover
, they
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think
that
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people
should spend the
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current
minute
happily
. I believe that thinking about the
Did you mean "latter" (=the second of two items)?
later
gives
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individual
the success, hope, motivation and
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
self confidence
. This essay would talk about how the
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planning
for the
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future
is not the waste of moment.

Firstly
,
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planning
for the
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future
takes a
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small
part of an individual's day,
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but
it is
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important
for achieving the
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goal
successfully
. Sketching the road map in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
moment would ensure that the achievement of
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goal
without any obstacles on the way to the journey of success.
For instance
, if an
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individual
wants to
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buy
a car in the later
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time
, he
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has to
plan on how he is going to
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buy
it.
Furthermore
,
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planning
right ahead of the beginning an assignment would save
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time
as
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people
have steps in their mind on how to perform the assignment.

Secondly
,
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planning
on certain tasks
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keeps
an
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individual
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motivated
and confident about the coming
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times
. When
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people
have set their minds to achieve something in the
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future
, it would
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keep
them
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motivated
and might
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help
them to
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get
closer to their
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goal
.
For example
, when I was younger, I
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used
to
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think
high school was difficult to graduate,
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but
when I graduated from high school, it
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motivated
and gave me the confidence to
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join
the college.

In conclusion
,
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planning
for the
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later
at the
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current
moment in not a waste of
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time
. In fact,
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planning
would not
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only
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keep
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individual
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motivated
and confident,
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but
also
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help
them achieve the
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goal
successfully
.
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9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be waste of time. they argue that people should simply live in the moment v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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