Money brings us happiness they say, does it really mean it? Everybody thinks that the most valuable thing a rich person can do is to help the poor. In this essay, we will come to know is it really mandatory to donate to them and why do I stand on it?
To begin, It cannot be earned easily. One needs to do hard work to earn it. For instance, according to XYZ stats there are about 70% human beings living below the poverty line in the world. If all the rich people donate their money to poor ones, as a result, they will become lazy to do work and expect the same to do so always.
Furthermore, I prefer someone to donate something apart from liquid currency. For example, clothes, books, food e. t. c. So that the they don't waste the currency notes. In other words, a friend of mine had given some currency notes to his servant maid for his son studies, but instead of using it properly he took it brought alcohol, and drank it. This clearly shows the difference between donating cash and other valuables.
Finally, the government should seek though this poverty issue and try to develop plans so that it could benefit the all people without and social discrimination. While, the ones with more cash should spend or donate it wisely and make sure that it is properly reached to the one indeed.
Money brings us happiness they say, does it
really
mean it? Everybody
thinks
that the most valuable thing a rich person can do is to
help
the poor. In this essay, we will
come
to know is it
really
mandatory to
donate
to them and why do I stand on it?
To
begin
, It cannot
be earned
easily
. One needs to do
hard
work to earn it.
For instance
, according to XYZ stats there are about 70% human beings living below the poverty line in the world. If all the rich
people
donate
their money to poor
ones
,
as a result
, they will become lazy to do work and
expect
the same to do
so
always
.
Furthermore
, I prefer someone to
donate
something apart from liquid currency.
For example
, clothes, books, food e. t. c.
So that
the they
don't waste the currency notes.
In other words
, a friend of mine had
given
some
currency notes to his servant maid for his son studies,
but
instead
of using it
properly
he took it brought alcohol, and drank it. This
clearly
shows
the difference between donating cash and other valuables.
Finally
, the
government
should seek though this poverty issue and try to develop plans
so
that it could benefit the all
people
without and social discrimination. While, the
ones
with more cash should spend or
donate
it
wisely
and
make
sure that it is
properly
reached to the one
indeed
.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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