Being rich in the society is not only the pride thing, but it also opens door to help others. Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is; it gives them a chance to help people who are in need. This essay will argue why money is moderately necessary to support in a large scale.
Money is not only the requirement to help others because helping others can be in any form. It can be in the form of providing free education, giving shelter to homeless people. For an instance, when I studied in Australia for one year where we had the task of supporting people who are mentally broke, so we helped them by motivating and showing them the path of success. In another instance, my aunt who is a teacher by profession where she supports underprivileged children by teaching them with no tuition fee. Therefore, being rich is not necessary in this kind of scenarios.
On the other hand, some people think that the most important thing of having more money gives a person the opportunity to help others. Being rich is sometimes necessary for those who wants to help because it provides a chance to support more number of people. For example, my brother who is an entrepreneur earns million dollars a year, so he runs a school for 500 students which provides everything for free.
Instead of paying hefty taxes to the government, they can do these activities.
This essay argued that why being rich is moderately necessary to help people. In my opinion, instead of paying high taxes by billionaires to the government, one can help directly to the people.
Being
rich
in the society is not
only
the pride thing,
but
it
also
opens door to
help
others.
Some
people
think
that the most
important
thing about being
rich
is; it gives them a chance to
help
people
who
are in need. This essay will argue why money is
moderately
necessary
to support in a large scale.
Money is not
only
the requirement to
help
others
because
helping others can be in any form. It can be in the form of providing free education, giving shelter to homeless
people
. For an instance, when I studied in Australia for one
year where
we had the task of supporting
people
who
are mentally broke,
so
we
helped
them by motivating and showing them the path of success. In another instance, my aunt
who
is a teacher by profession where she supports underprivileged children by teaching them with no tuition fee.
Therefore
, being
rich
is not
necessary
in this kind of scenarios.
On the
other
hand,
some
people
think
that the most
important
thing of having more money gives a person the opportunity to
help
others. Being
rich
is
sometimes
necessary
for those
who
wants to
help
because
it provides a chance to support more number of
people
.
For example
, my brother
who
is an entrepreneur earns
million
dollars a year,
so
he runs a school for 500 students which provides everything for free.
Instead
of paying hefty taxes to the
government
, they can do these activities.
This essay argued that why being
rich
is
moderately
necessary
to
help
people
. In my opinion,
instead
of paying high taxes by billionaires to the
government
, one can
help
directly
to the
people
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes