Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while other think that people and community are become more isolated Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.3

The role if internet contribute an enormous impact on our present society. Each individul nowadays communicate each other easily anytime and anywhere. While others argued that this gives drawbacks for others who prepared to separate themselves to others. This essay will discuss both sides and provide my own opinion. In general the used of internet gain a huge amount of help in any aspect of individual lives and society. Firstly, with the used of internet helps people keep in touch to each other. For example, an overseas workers working in other part of the world can easily chat or send massages to family back home. Up to date everyday routine every time and anywhere. This ease the feeling of loneliness and homesickness. Second, internet is a source of wide range of news and updates around the globe which provide the public the latest news worldwide. On the other side of the argument, while internet lend a wide merits in each individual and as a whole of the society the drawbacks are inevitable. To name some for example, using an internet could led to self isolation of one person. Like student who prepare to used internet for the whole day chatting and watching netflix is not a better idea soon be addicted to this kinds of stuff thus will effect on ones attitude in the future. Overall in my opinion although internet provide a various ways of communication. I totally agree that both have pros and cons nonetheless the usage of internet outweigh the drawbacks.

The role if internet contribute an enormous impact on our present society. Each Possible spelling mistake found.individual
individul
 nowadays communicate each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
easily
 anytime and anywhere. While others argued that this gives drawbacks for others who prepared to separate themselves to others. This essay will discuss both sides and provide my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 opinion. In general
 the Did you mean the noun “use”?use
used
 of internet gain a huge amount of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in any aspect of individual This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 and society. Firstly
, with the Did you mean the noun “use”?use
used
 of internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in touch to each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
. For example
, The plural noun “workers” cannot be used with the article “an”. Did you mean “an overseas worker” or “overseas workers”?an overseas workeroverseas workers
an overseas workers
 working in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 part of the world can easily
 chat or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
Did you mean “messages”?messages
massages
 to family back home. Up to date everyday routine every time and anywhere. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
 the feeling of loneliness and homesickness. Second, internet is a source of wide range of news and updates around the globe which provide the public the latest news worldwide. On the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 side of the argument, while internet lend a wide merits in each individual and as a whole of the society the drawbacks are inevitable. To name This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
for example
, using an internet could The modal verb ‘could’ requires the verb’s base form.lead
led
 to This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.self-isolation
self isolation
 of one person. Like student who prepare to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 internet for the whole day chatting and watching Possible spelling mistake found.Netflix
netflix
 is not a better This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
be addicted
 to ‘This’ does not seem to match the plural noun ‘kinds’. Did you mean “these”?these
this
 kinds of stuff thus
 will Did you mean “affect” (have an effect upon)?affect
effect
 on ones attitude in the future. Overall
 in my opinion although internet provide The plural noun “ways” cannot be used with the article “a”. Did you mean “a various way” or “various ways”?a various wayvarious ways
a various ways
 of communication. I totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that both have pros and cons nonetheless the usage of internet outweigh the drawbacks. 