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some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. however, some say individuals should pay for their university education. discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.1

some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. however, some say individuals should pay for their university education. v. 1
It is generally observed by a section of society that the authorities ought to be offered free education system. Whereas, another section of society prefers that people should be responsible for affording for paying their graduation fees. I strongly believe that there should be a free education system to provide employment to an individual. This essay will discuss the both views with the ample examples in subsequent paragraphs. To commence with, there would be at least two facets of this approach. First and foremost is to educate the youngsters who are not able to afford the high fees of schools. Moreover, teenagers are the backbone of any nation, thus it is a duty of the government to provide the free schooling for individuals. For example, a report depicts the data of more employment rate in Canada as compared to India and Pakistan. In addition, Canada provides the free education, whereas India and Pakistan charges the fees as higher amount which leads to the unemployment and poverty. On the other hand, it is generally observed that paying for higher education is mostly considered for the betterment of a country. Firstly, this approach is beneficial as it provides more amenities for the students such as practice labs and equipments needed for their course. Secondly, by receiving funds from parents, an institute can make the ambience more spacious as well as arrange best tutors. To conclude, education should be free at entry level to provide job opportunities in the specialization. However, paying fees should be considered to be pursuing the masters degrees, yet it ought to be reasonable and cheap.
It is
generally
observed by a section of society that the authorities ought to
be offered
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
system. Whereas, another section of society prefers that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
should be responsible for affording for paying their graduation
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fees
. I
strongly
believe that there should be a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
system to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
provide
employment to an individual. This essay will discuss the both views with the ample examples in subsequent paragraphs.

To commence with, there would be at least two facets of this approach.
First
and foremost is to educate the youngsters who are not able to afford the high
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fees
of schools.
Moreover
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
are the backbone of any nation,
thus
it is a duty of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
provide
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
schooling for individuals.
For example
, a report depicts the data of more employment rate in Canada as compared to India and Pakistan.
In addition
, Canada
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
provides
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
, whereas India and Pakistan charges the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fees
as higher amount which leads to the unemployment and poverty.

On the other hand
, it is
generally
observed that paying for higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
is
mostly
considered for the betterment of a country.
Firstly
, this approach is beneficial as it
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
provides
more amenities for the students such as practice labs and equipments needed for their course.
Secondly
, by receiving funds from parents, an institute can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the ambience more spacious
as well
as arrange best tutors.

To conclude
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
should be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
at entry level to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
provide
job opportunities in the specialization.
However
, paying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fees
should
be considered
to be pursuing the
For an academic degree, use "master’s".
masters
degrees,
yet
it ought to be reasonable and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. however, some say individuals should pay for their university education. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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