It is considered that imposing higher taxes on junk foods would allow people to consume healthier foods. However, I strongly believe that this is not the most effective way to solve this.
To begin with, higher taxes on unhealthy foods mean increase in prices on commodities, yet only poor people would likely be affected on this matter. Moreover, this movement would cause inconvenience to working employees because the time they can spend personally or with their families would be only used to prepare foods at home. Finally, higher taxes will not discourage affluent consumers, especially the rich ones, from buying fast foods. They will still continue to consume, hence, increasing the tax on these foods will have only a marginal effect on its consumption.
Perhaps a better solution is to make healthy foods more available and affordable. People nowadays are totally aware of the consequences of eating too much foods which are not nutritious. As a matter of fact, more people are more inclined to eat fruits, vegetables and other kind of healthier foods, but the lack of supply and excessive prices in the marketplace hinder the people to purchase these foods. As a result, buying from fast food chains becomes the alternative because it is more convenient and cheaper.
As a summary, I am against to increase taxes on unhealthy foods will only deter low income earners from buying them. A better way to help reduce consumption of these foods is to make the healthier alternative more affordable and convenient.
It
is considered
that imposing higher
taxes
on junk
foods
would
allow
people
to consume healthier
foods
.
However
, I
strongly
believe that this is not the most effective way to solve this.
To
begin
with, higher
taxes
on unhealthy
foods
mean increase in prices on commodities,
yet
only
poor
people
would likely be
affected
on this matter.
Moreover
, this movement would cause inconvenience to working employees
because
the time they can spend
personally
or with their families would be
only
used
to prepare
foods
at home.
Finally
, higher
taxes
will not discourage affluent consumers,
especially
the rich ones, from buying
fast
foods
. They will
still
continue to consume,
hence
, increasing the
tax
on these
foods
will have
only
a marginal effect on its consumption.
Perhaps a better solution is to
make
healthy
foods
more available and affordable.
People
nowadays are
totally
aware of the consequences of eating too
much
foods
which are not nutritious. As a matter of fact, more
people
are more inclined to eat fruits, vegetables and other kind of healthier
foods
,
but
the lack of supply and excessive prices in the marketplace hinder the
people
to
purchase
these
foods
.
As a result
, buying from
fast
food
chains becomes the alternative
because
it is more convenient and cheaper.
As
a summary, I am against to increase
taxes
on unhealthy
foods
will
only
deter low income earners from buying them. A better way to
help
reduce
consumption of these
foods
is to
make
the healthier alternative more affordable and convenient.
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