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some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvanatages of a family run business v.1

some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvanatages of a family run business v. 1
People have different perceptions on how to run a business smoothly. Some persons believe that the most effective method to continue a business is running it within the family members. The major advantage of this action is transition of knowledge and demerit is reduction in investments or in revenues. This essay will firstly discuss the positive impact and then secondly, outline the disadvantage. To begin with, one of the merits of family business is transferring knowledge to the future generation. When ancestors pass the valuable information on how to progress on the business in a competitive market and explain the strategies to follow, youngsters in the family will acquire the best methodologies to compete, which enhance them to handle the business later. As a result, they can perform better and create profits as they are aware of the solutions to tackle the problems, that had occurred in the past. For example, many businesses which are handled by the family members, are able to produce a constant growth through the possessed knowledge and efforts. On the other hand, investments to buy items will be a constraint, if the family is not able to support the business financially. This means that, If the financial status of a family is not constant, then they will not be able to buy commodities which are required by consumers. Besides, if the business could not bring fortune to the family, the wealth of the family will be in trouble. Consequently, loss of the business can bring debt and family people will struggle to meet the two ends. There are many exemplifications where families are ruined due to the lackof revenue from the business. In conclusion, while there are a number of ways to run a business, majority of people prefer to run it within a family. This phenomenon has its own positive and negative impacts on the living style of people.
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have
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perceptions on how to run a
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business
smoothly
.
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Some
persons believe that the most effective method to continue a
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business
is running it within the
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family
members. The major advantage of this action is transition of knowledge and demerit is reduction in investments or in revenues. This essay will
firstly
discuss the
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positive
impact and then
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, outline the disadvantage.

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begin
with, one of the merits of
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family
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business
is transferring knowledge to the future generation. When ancestors pass the valuable information on how to progress on the
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business
in a competitive market and
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explain
the strategies to follow, youngsters in the
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family
will acquire the best methodologies to compete, which enhance them to handle the
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business
later.
As a result
, they can perform better and create profits as they are aware of the solutions to tackle the problems, that had occurred in the past.
For example
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many
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businesses
which
are handled
by the
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family
members, are able to produce a constant growth through the possessed knowledge and efforts.

On the other hand
, investments to
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buy
items will be a constraint, if the
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family
is not able to support the
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business
financially
. This means that, If the financial status of a
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family
is not constant, then they will not be able to
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buy
commodities which
are required
by consumers.
Besides
, if the
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business
could not bring fortune to the
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family
, the wealth of the
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family
will be in trouble.
Consequently
, loss of the
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business
can bring debt and
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family
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people
will struggle to
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meet
the two ends. There are
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many
exemplifications where
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families
are ruined
due to the
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revenue from the business.

In conclusion
, while there are a number of ways to run a
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business
, majority of
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people
prefer to run it within a
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family
. This phenomenon has its
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own
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positive
and
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impacts on the living style of
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people
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IELTS essay some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvanatages of a family run business v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
315 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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