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Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a family-run business? v.5

Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a family-run business? v. 5
In many parts of the worlds, there is the business which is run by the family. Although there are some benefits associated with the family business, there are also some drawbacks to undertake it. Firstly, being the part of the family work can help family members understand the expectation among individuals. Clear communication and discussion can help to achieve family goals at a rapid pace. For instance, almost the majority of big companies were started by the family member, like Ambani’s and Walton’s. Secondly, even during the bad times the family members stay together and run business. On the contrary, leaving the family business in the middle of the path can lead to personal grudges among the family member and the heritage of the family is vanished. On the other hand, the family business can have many drawbacks when certain family member has a lack of proper knowledge to run the business. For instance, business of share brokerage should require in-depth knowledge of share market and financial situation of the companies, Lack of knowledge will result in the closure of venture, In addition, personal grudges can also lead to a difference of opinion in the family member. For instance, the rivalry between husband and wife can also lead to the partition of the venture. Furthermore, a lack of interest can lead to failure of joint business. To conclude, there are both supporting and opposing arguments for a family business. Many experts believe that building an organization with family helps keep the family together. With communication and understanding, a dispute in family entrepreneurship can be avoided.
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which
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family
. Although there are
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some
benefits associated with the
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family
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business
, there are
also
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some
drawbacks to undertake it.

Firstly
, being the part of the
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family
work can
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help
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family
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members
understand the expectation among individuals.
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Clear
communication and discussion can
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help
to achieve
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family
goals at a rapid pace.
For instance
, almost the majority of
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big
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companies
were
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started
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family
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, like
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Ambani
’s and Walton’s.
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, even during the
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bad
times the
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family
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members
stay together and run
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business
.
On the contrary
, leaving the
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family
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business
in the middle of the path can
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lead
to personal grudges among the
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family
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member
and the heritage of the
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family
is vanished
.

On the other hand
, the
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business
can have
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many
drawbacks when certain
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family
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member
has a lack of proper knowledge to run the
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business
.
For instance
,
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business
of share brokerage should require in-depth knowledge of share market and financial situation of the
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companies
, Lack of knowledge will result in the closure of venture,
In addition
, personal grudges can
also
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lead
to a difference of opinion in the
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family
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member
.
For instance
, the rivalry between husband and wife can
also
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lead
to the partition of the venture.
Furthermore
, a lack of interest can
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lead
to failure of joint business.

To conclude
, there are both supporting and opposing arguments for a
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family
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business
.
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Many
experts believe that building an organization with
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family
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helps
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keep
the
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family
together. With communication and understanding, a dispute in
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family
entrepreneurship can
be avoided
.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a family-run business? v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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