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some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live, discuss both sides

Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others thinks that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. v. 4

Peoples have not enough information about the galaxy. Even if a small discovery in-universe is sensational news. I think learning the universe is useful to humanity. However, it takes a lot of our energy and resources, and discussion for these sides outlined below. The galaxy is infinity and it has billions of planets like earth. In theory, it is possible that other solar systems might have planets which have living beings. I also think that exploring the galaxy is not just wasting resources because information gained by people might be beneficial in the future. It is clear that resources on the earth are not infinite. The time will come when the earth becomes unuseful to humans and they will have to find another planed to live for sure. It will not happen in coming many centuries, nevertheless, I agree with people who think information gained by exploring the galaxy might be useful. We knew that most fantastic films about the galaxy that we have seen based on real theories. On the other hand, we also have to point out some drawbacks of exploring the universe. Based on most people's opinion, launching a spaceship into space requires billions of dollars, resources to build it and takes no less than one year of preparation. Furthermore, the risk of an explosion during the launch of a celestial spacecraft is also very high. To conclude, explore the universe expands our worldview. We can not say that it is not essential to learn about it.

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enough
 information about the galaxy. “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even if
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small
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think
 learning the universe is useful to humanity. However
, it takes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 our energy and resources, and discussion for these sides outlined below.

The galaxy is infinity and it has billions of planets like earth. In theory, it is possible that other solar systems might have planets which have living beings. I also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that exploring the galaxy is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 wasting resources This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 information gained by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 might be beneficial in the future. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that resources on the earth are not infinite. The time will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 when the earth becomes unuseful to Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).humans, and
humans and
 they will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 find another planed to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 for sure. It will not happen in coming This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 centuries, nevertheless
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 information gained by exploring the galaxy might be useful. We knew that most fantastic films about the galaxy that we have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 based on real theories.

On the other hand
, we also
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have to
 point out This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 drawbacks of exploring the universe. Based on most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's opinion, launching a spaceship into space requires billions of dollars, resources to build it and takes no less than one year of preparation. Furthermore
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 of an explosion during the launch of a celestial spacecraft is also
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very
 high.

To conclude
, explore the universe expands our worldview. We can not say that it is not essential to learn about it. 