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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. v.12

Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. v. 12
It is certainly true that mixed ability classes have some benefits which are highly appreciable but many people contend that streaming education system is well effective and provide more facilities to obtain a successful career in future. However, admittedly I would prefer a segregating school education rather than mix up because streaming curriculum is well standard and a bit easier for teachers and students to act according to their respective lessons. Firstly, viewing the positive aspects of mixed ability classes are that, by following this methodology students would able to furnish their hidden creativity. For example, if a non-singer brilliant student is put in a class where many singers and other creative students study together, then that boy can spontaneously generate singing ability inside him. Additionally, vice-versa may occur deliberately when some weak non-attentive students are kept in a class with talented scholars. On the other part of given statement, I assume that it would be more convenient for the instructors and students if the followers belong to an equal stream. Teachers can bring up their lectures according to the student’s need and understanding. For instance, if a classroom holds half of top stream and half of bottom stream students, then it may plausible that the whole class will not acquire the prepared lecture spontaneously, in turn, some of them may need special assistances which may illustrate the duration of the school curriculum. To recapitulate, confessedly, mixed up ability classes may provide chances of versatile developments but in sharp contrast, streaming education would be more convenient and relaxing approach to studying and preparing lessons.
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certainly
true that mixed
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ability
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classes
have
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some
benefits which are
highly
appreciable
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but
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many
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people
contend that streaming education system is well effective and provide more facilities to obtain a successful career
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in future
.
However
,
admittedly
I would prefer a segregating school education
rather
than mix up
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because
streaming curriculum is well standard and a bit easier for teachers and
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students
to act according to their respective lessons.

Firstly
, viewing the
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positive
aspects of mixed
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ability
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classes
are that, by following this methodology
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students
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would able
to furnish their hidden creativity.
For example
, if a non-singer brilliant
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student
is put
in a
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class
where
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many
singers and other creative
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students
study together, then that boy can
spontaneously
generate singing
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ability
inside him.
Additionally
, vice-versa may occur
deliberately
when
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some
weak non-attentive
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students
are
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kept
in a
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class
with talented scholars.

On the other part of
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given
statement, I assume that it would be more convenient for the instructors and
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students
if the followers belong to an equal stream. Teachers can bring up their lectures according to the
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student’s
need and understanding.
For instance
, if a classroom holds half of top stream and half of bottom stream
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students
, then it
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may plausible
that the whole
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class
will not acquire the prepared lecture
spontaneously
, in turn,
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some
of them may need special
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assistances
which may illustrate the duration of the school curriculum.

To recapitulate,
confessedly
, mixed up
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ability
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classes
may provide chances of versatile developments
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
in sharp contrast, streaming education would be more convenient and relaxing approach to studying and preparing lessons.
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15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. v. 12

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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