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some people think that schools select student according to their academic abilities. Others believe that it is better to have student with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and give you own opinions v.1

some people think that schools select student according to their academic abilities. Others believe that it is better to have student with different abilities studying together. 1
Alternative forms for every original product is available more in the market than the original itself. The usage of other forms of medicine has become more trending, although people know that the methods may lead to a serious bad effect in its worst case. This essay will describe the ineffectiveness of the different forms of remedy and my agreement with the given situation. The use of alternative forms of medication has become more popular because of getting the same composition as the original one at a much cheaper price. If there is a single prescription with a particular amount of chemicals in it becomes more demanding and low productivity, the price will increase and becomes costly for the mediocre people. So they opt for the same drug composition, but at less cost. For example, Paracetamol and Solo are consumed during fever, whereas Paracetamol is costlier than Solo. Having same stimulant composition, the two medicines creates a price margin, forcing people to use the alternative forms rather than the original one. All alternatives cannot provide the same support as the original does, however, that may lead to dangerous consequences. It may provide relief for a certain period of time, but it does not guarantee a permanent fix for that disease. For example, injections are pushed into our body in order to allow the chemicals mix into the blood directly and capsules with same components are digested and then allow them to act in our body. The antibodies need to act properly, otherwise it may show side effect in our body which may even lead to death. So alternatives are okay till a certain point, but cannot give the same treatment as the original form of the cure. My view of this situation is not to use the other ways of consuming the narcotic and take the medicine in its proper form. This may cost a bit more, but it is regarding life that must be considered seriously. I have seen people are afraid of syringe and prefer to take pills more often. It leads to temporary cure and that disease repeats periodically, which proves that the process of curing it was not accurate.
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Alternative
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forms
for every
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original
product is available more in the market than the
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original
itself. The usage of other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forms
of medicine has
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become
more trending, although
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people
know that the methods may
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lead
to a serious
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bad
effect in its worst case. This essay will
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describe
the ineffectiveness of the
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different
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forms
of remedy and my agreement with the
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given
situation.

The
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use
of
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alternative
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forms
of medication has
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become
more popular
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because
of getting the same composition as the
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original
one at a much cheaper price. If there is a single prescription with a particular amount of chemicals in it
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becomes
more demanding and low productivity, the price will increase and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
becomes
costly for the mediocre
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people
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
they opt for the same drug composition,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
at less cost.
For example
, Paracetamol and Solo
are consumed
during fever, whereas Paracetamol is costlier than Solo. Having same stimulant composition, the two medicines creates a price margin, forcing
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people
to
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use
the
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alternative
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forms
rather
than the
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original
one.

All
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alternatives
cannot provide the same support as the
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original
does,
however
, that may
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lead
to
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dangerous
consequences. It may provide relief for a certain period of time,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it does not guarantee a permanent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
for that disease.
For example
, injections
are pushed
into our body in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
the chemicals mix into the blood
directly
and capsules with same components
are digested
and then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
them to act in our body. The antibodies need to act
properly
,
otherwise
it may
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show
side effect in our body which may even
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lead
to death.
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So
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alternatives
are okay till a certain point,
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but
cannot give the same treatment as the
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original
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form
of the cure.

My view of this situation is not to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the other ways of consuming the narcotic and take the medicine in its proper
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form
. This may cost a bit more,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it is regarding life that
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must
be considered
seriously
. I have
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seen
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people
are afraid of
The noun should be probably in the plural form: "syringes".
syringe
and prefer to take pills more
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often
. It leads to temporary cure and that disease repeats
periodically
, which proves that the process of curing it was not accurate.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay some people think that schools select student according to their academic abilities. Others believe that it is better to have student with different abilities studying together. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
362 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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