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Some people think that public libraries are no longer important, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.10

Some people think that public libraries are no longer important, while others disagree. v. 10
Since libraries existed, they have played an important role in society. While a number of people believe that libraries has become unimportant, some have the opposite view. This essay will discuss why libraries are still ultimately important, but why they are losing significance they have. A public library is certainly one of the major facilities which contribute to the education of people. However, do libraries still matter in the digitized world? Nowadays, many college students prefer a library atmosphere rather than the home environment in order to study efficiently. Moreover, many people still continue to borrow books regularly from local libraries. For example, finding an available desk afternoon in the National Library, which is situated in Ankara, and can accommodate approximately 1200 people, is hardly possible. As another example, 1. 5 million books were borrowed by bookworms in 2018. Therefore, it goes without saying that public libraries have a great importance among young people as well as adults. Nowadays, the interest to public libraries has relatively decreased over recent years. The main reason behind this trend is the increase of electronic reader usage among people. Today, some people enjoy digital books rather than printed books. For instance, a survey conducted by the Research Institute of Literacy has shown that 90% of the users of e-book readers never have visited a library after adapting the digital reader, and so, the number of people who visit regularly libraries decreased by 5%. However, the slightly decreasing figure shows that many people still benefit from library facilities. In conclusion, this essay discussed why library facilities maintain its own significance but why they are losing slight importance. In my opinion, although digitalisation affects minimally the importance of libraries, they are still among the essential facilities of the society.
Since libraries existed, they have played an
important
role in society. While a number of
people
believe that libraries has become unimportant,
some
have the opposite view. This essay will discuss why libraries are
still
ultimately
important
,
but
why they are losing significance they have.

A public library is
certainly
one of the major facilities which contribute to the education of
people
.
However
, do libraries
still
matter in the digitized world? Nowadays,
many
college students prefer a library atmosphere
rather
than the home environment in order to study
efficiently
.
Moreover
,
many
people
still
continue to borrow
books
regularly
from local libraries.
For example
, finding an available desk afternoon in the National Library, which
is situated
in Ankara, and can accommodate approximately 1200
people
, is hardly possible. As another example, 1. 5 million
books
were borrowed
by bookworms in 2018.
Therefore
, it goes without saying that public libraries have a great importance among young
people
as well
as adults.

Nowadays, the interest to public libraries has
relatively
decreased over recent years. The main reason behind this trend is the increase of electronic reader usage among
people
.
Today
,
some
people
enjoy digital
books
rather
than printed
books
.
For instance
, a survey conducted by the Research Institute of Literacy has shown that 90% of the users of e-book readers never have visited a library after adapting the digital reader, and
so
, the number of
people
who visit
regularly
libraries decreased by 5%.
However
, the
slightly
decreasing figure
shows
that
many
people
still
benefit from library facilities.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed why library facilities maintain its
own
significance
but
why they are losing slight importance. In my opinion, although
digitalisation
affects
minimally
the importance of libraries, they are
still
among the essential facilities of the society.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that public libraries are no longer important, while others disagree. v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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Grammatical Range: 8.0
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