Should we allow elderly people above 60 on the job on not is a very big question for todays world? I mostly disagree with this approach. Let me explain why I feel that way.
Firstly, a lot of people work in private industry or owns a small family business where the government can't enforce such rules and so it is out of the question for them. Given that if we enforce it on other people it will be kind of unfair to them.
Secondly, our government does not have enough resources to provide pension to all such people. In such situation, working is the only option if they don't have savings. Such forced rules will make their life harder.
Thirdly, I have personally seen many people at age 60 who are very healthy and perfectly capable of working. Forcing them out of work is very counter productive. Also, boredom is one of the major concerns of elderly people. Sometimes all they need is some work to pass the time.
However, many people feel that older workers are very inefficient in their jobs and it is best to replace them with younger folks. I suggest to reduce working hours for older workers in such case. In many sectors like health industry, we don't have enough doctors available. Such rule would make finding doctor's appointment extremely hard.
In conclusion, I feel that forcing people out of a job is not a good option. Such decision should be made on a case by case basis.
Should we
allow
elderly
people
above 60 on the job on not is a
very
big
question for
todays
world? I
mostly
disagree with this approach.
Let
me
explain
why I feel that way.
Firstly
,
a lot of
people
work in
private industry
or
owns
a
small
family business where the
government
can't enforce such
rules
and
so
it is out of the question for them.
Given
that if we enforce it on other
people
it will be kind of unfair to them.
Secondly
, our
government
does not have
enough
resources to provide pension to all such
people
. In such situation, working is the
only
option if they don't have savings. Such forced
rules
will
make
their life harder.
Thirdly
, I have
personally
seen
many
people
at age 60 who are
very
healthy and
perfectly
capable of working. Forcing them out of work is
very
counter productive
.
Also
, boredom is one of the major concerns of elderly
people
.
Sometimes
all they need is
some
work to pass the time.
However
,
many
people
feel that older workers are
very
inefficient in their jobs and it is best to replace them with younger folks. I suggest to
reduce
working hours for older workers in such case. In
many
sectors like health industry, we don't have
enough
doctors available. Such
rule
would
make
finding doctor's appointment
extremely
hard
.
In conclusion
, I feel that forcing
people
out of a job is not a
good
option. Such decision should
be made
on a case by case basis.
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