Educators have debated whether a child’s life is significantly affected by parents more than other aspects or not. From my perspective, parents are always have important effect toward their child and no one can get rid of the influence of parents and family.
Some people who are against this idea may argue that children will leave their home and live independently when they grow up. And therefore influence from outside the home such as stress from bosses or comflicts with classmates will affect an individuals’ attitude toward society and world. Even during childhood kids always was taught by teacher at school or spent time with their friends. It seems parents influence less than people who outside the home but the truth is not.
One idea that has received much attention is that the majority of children tend to obtain knowledge from their parents mainly because of its convenience and utility. Although, children are able to gain knowledge from their teachers or just by themselves, parents can teach the kids a number of life skills which useful in real life. Children observe their parents and imitate parents’ behaviour and in a long-term parents’ experience will become kids’ own advantages in this complicated society. For another, parents also tend to create a favorable environment for children. Some parents have enough power to help their kids overcome obtacles and be success. Overall, to give their next generation a better life, parents will always consider everything and thus their influence will larger than any other people in kids’ life.
In conclusion, I tend to believe parents have more influence to children than other factors and they always try their best to help their kids.
Educators have debated whether a child’s
life
is
significantly
affected
by
parents
more than other aspects or not. From my perspective,
parents
are always
have
important
effect toward their child and no one can
get
rid of the
influence
of
parents
and family.
Some
people
who are against this
idea
may argue that
children
will
leave
their home and
live
independently
when they grow up. And
therefore
influence
from outside the home such as
stress
from bosses or
comflicts
with classmates will affect an individuals’ attitude toward society and world. Even during childhood
kids
always
was taught
by teacher at school or spent time with their friends. It seems
parents
influence
less than
people
who outside the home
but
the truth is not.
One
idea
that has received much attention is that the majority of
children
tend to obtain knowledge from their
parents
mainly
because
of its convenience and utility. Although,
children
are able to gain knowledge from their teachers or
just
by themselves,
parents
can teach the
kids
a number of
life
skills
which useful in real
life
.
Children
observe their
parents
and imitate
parents’
behaviour
and in a long-term
parents’
experience will become
kids’
own
advantages in this complicated society. For another,
parents
also
tend to create a favorable environment for
children
.
Some
parents
have
enough
power to
help
their
kids
overcome
obtacles
and be success.
Overall
, to give their
next
generation a better
life
,
parents
will always consider everything and
thus
their
influence
will larger than any other
people
in
kids’
life.
In conclusion
, I tend to believe
parents
have more
influence
to
children
than other
factors and
they always try their best to
help
their
kids
.
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34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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