A growing number of people think that the government should not only fund professional sports and cultural society, but also the societies where adults and children are learning sports. I completely agree with this as it will help the children explore their talents and adults to improve their talent.
There are a large number of talented individuals in India who are unable to reach the desired heights in the sport of cultural events due to lack of financial support. They lack a money to pay for the coaches and cannot afford the required equipment to practice the skill. If the right training with the proper coaches and pieces of equipment is provided to such individuals than they can represent the country at various international games and make the country proud by winning the medals. So, the government should also provide a necessary fund to the amateur and learning groups so that the talented adults can improve their skills and represent the nations at the national and international level.
The other reason is that the children can also explore various sports and decide which sport they are good at and can pursue further. The government funding also encourages the parents to allow their child/children to pursue sports along with academics. These children could also become the future of the nation and represent the country from a very young age at various international platforms.
In conclusion, Government funding of amateur adults and children's societies help talented individuals lacking financial support to improve and grow their skills.
A growing number of
people
think
that the
government
should not
only
fund professional
sports
and cultural society,
but
also
the societies where
adults
and
children
are learning
sports
. I completely
agree
with this as it will
help
the
children
explore their talents and
adults
to
improve
their talent.
There are
a large number of
talented individuals in India who are unable to reach the desired heights in the
sport
of cultural
events
due to lack of financial support. They lack
a money
to pay for the coaches and cannot afford the required equipment to practice the
skill
. If the right training with the proper coaches and pieces of equipment
is provided
to such individuals than they can represent the country at various international games and
make
the country proud by winning the medals.
So
, the
government
should
also
provide a necessary fund to the amateur and learning groups
so
that the talented
adults
can
improve
their
skills
and represent the nations at the national and international level.
The other reason is that the
children
can
also
explore various
sports
and decide which
sport
they are
good
at and can pursue
further
. The
government
funding
also
encourages the parents to
allow
their child/children to pursue
sports
along with academics. These
children
could
also
become the future of the nation and represent the country from a
very
young age at various international platforms.
In conclusion
,
Government
funding of amateur
adults
and children's societies
help
talented individuals lacking financial support to
improve
and grow their
skills
.
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