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Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.4

Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. v. 4
How houses should be built? This has become the most important topic of discussion these days. While some say, people should adopt conventional patterns of building houses. Others argue that, people should be given the freedom to choose how they want to get it constructed. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument. However, in my opinion, the occupants of the house should have the freedom to decide how it should look. On the one hand, there are few benefits of following the traditional styles of building a house. It gives a classic look to the neighbourhood. Also, when all houses look the same, residents feel a sense of equality. For example, in the city of Mumbai government has demolished a lot of small houses and have built tall buildings to match other buildings in the locality. People build luxurious homes to show off their wealth. By simply asking them to build a home that matches other homes in the locality government can stop this audacious display of wealth. On the flip side, there are many more benefits of building a home as per the needs and wants of its owner. To start with, homes that look alike lacks character. A home is a reflection of an owner's personality. It is a space you own and for this reason, the local authorities should let people decide how they want their homes to be built. Furthermore, traditional buildings are not energy efficient. It lacks a lot of modern features such as attached bathrooms or modular kitchen. In addition, adding features such as CCTV cameras in a traditional home can also be a challenge. To conclude, while it is easy to follow the historical style of building homes. In my opinion, it is important to allow people to decide how they want their homes to be built because a home is much more than a place to live in. It is an extension of your personality.
How
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houses
should
be built
? This has become the most
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important
topic of discussion these days. While
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some
say,
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people
should adopt conventional patterns of
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building
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houses
. Others argue that,
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people
should be
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given
the freedom to choose how they
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want
to
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get
it constructed. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
However
, in my opinion, the occupants of the
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house
should have the freedom to decide how it should look.

On the one hand, there are few benefits of following the traditional styles of
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building
a
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house
. It gives a classic look to the
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neighbourhood
.
Also
, when all
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houses
look the same, residents feel a sense of equality.
For example
, in the city of Mumbai
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government
has demolished
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a lot of
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small
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houses
and have built tall
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buildings
to match other
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buildings
in the locality.
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People
build luxurious
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homes
to
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show
off their wealth. By
simply
asking them to build a home that matches other
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homes
in the locality
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government
can
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stop
this audacious display of wealth.

On the flip side, there are
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many
more benefits of
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building
a home as per the needs and
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wants
of its owner. To
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start
with,
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homes
that look alike lacks character. A home is a reflection of an owner's personality. It is a space you
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own
and
for this reason
, the local authorities should
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let
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people
decide how they
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want
their
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homes
to
be built
.
Furthermore
, traditional
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buildings
are not energy efficient. It lacks
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
modern features such as attached bathrooms or modular kitchen.
In addition
, adding features such as CCTV cameras in a traditional home can
also
be a challenge.

To conclude
, while it is easy to follow the historical style of
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building
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
homes
. In my opinion, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
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people
to decide how they
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want
their
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homes
to
be built
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
a home is much more than a place to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in. It is an extension of your personality.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
325 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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