With the advent of technology people’s way of communicating have changed. Communication between individuals who are separated by a distance has become easier through the use of cell phone and internet. While others say that such technology makes people more sociable, others are of the notion that it has affected the way we socialize adversely. In my point of view, it has improved the means we connect to people who are far from us, but it has had a negative effect on how we socialize personally.
Modern technology such as cell phone and internet has improved the way we communicate to our love ones who is far from us. Cell phones and internet can be used with a click of a finger, not only to talk to someone across the globe, but also we can see them through video call. We can use cell phone applications like “IMO” and” face time” to make video calls, here we can see them like face to face. As such brings a feeling that as if we are with our love ones.
However, though these technologies have had benefits of long distance communication, it has also spoiled the way we deal face to face. Many people nowadays do not personally talk as often as before. It is common to see people who are spending a lot of their time in their phone checking face book and chatting with someone. In doing so, they lessen their time in talking to someone who is with them. For instance, in a restaurant, some people do not often talk to each other because everyone is busy on their cell phones. Situations like this took away the precious time for personal communications.
In conclusion, although modern technology has improved the way we socialize with someone who is miles away from us, it has affected the way we deal with someone who is with us adversely. Self-discipline should be observed in using communication technology so that socialization in our community will not be compromised.
With the advent of
technology
people’s
way of communicating have
changed
. Communication between individuals
who
are separated
by a distance has become easier through the
use
of
cell
phone
and internet. While others say that such
technology
makes
people
more sociable, others are of the notion that it has
affected
the way we socialize
adversely
. In my point of view, it has
improved
the means we connect to
people
who
are far from us,
but
it has had a
negative
effect on how we socialize
personally
.
Modern
technology
such as
cell
phone
and internet has
improved
the way we communicate to our
love ones
who
is
far from us.
Cell
phones
and internet can be
used
with a click of a finger, not
only
to talk to
someone
across the globe,
but
also
we can
see
them through video call. We can
use
cell
phone
applications like “IMO” and”
face
time”
to
make
video calls, here we can
see
them like
face
to
face
. As such brings a feeling that as if we are with our
love ones
.
However
, though these
technologies
have had benefits of long distance communication, it has
also
spoiled the way we deal
face
to
face
.
Many
people
nowadays do not
personally
talk as
often
as
before
. It is common to
see
people
who
are spending
a lot of
their
time
in their
phone
checking
face
book and chatting with
someone
. In doing
so
, they lessen their
time
in talking to
someone
who
is with them.
For instance
, in a restaurant,
some
people
do not
often
talk to each other
because
everyone is busy on their
cell
phones
. Situations like this took away the precious
time
for personal communications.
In conclusion
, although modern
technology
has
improved
the way we socialize with
someone
who
is miles away from us, it has
affected
the way we deal with
someone
who
is with us
adversely
. Self-discipline should
be observed
in using communication
technology
so
that socialization in our community will not
be compromised
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
45Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes