The government has always been dealing with the problem of spending the budget of a country or a city on a right issue, since the amount of the budget is limited. Although some people may argue that the money should be spent on enhancing educational systems and healthcare centres, others may believe that the money should be spent on constructing impressive buildings which are important for a city.
As mentioned, some people believe that impressive buildings are important for a city. I agree with that to some degree. Considering diverse materials and technologies used for constructing such a building, altogether with the implemented architecture, it will eventually become a symbol of that city. If that building is successful in drawing attention to itself, more and more people would want to visit the city, leading to the improvement of the economy of the city.
However, I strongly believe that schools and hospitals should not put aside and governments should pay close attention to improve them too. Improved schools mean that more children can receive a proper education and in my opinion it is a farsighted investment. Similarly, people will benefit from improved hospitals and healthcare centres as more people would have access to these places and less people would suffer from diseases.
In conclusion, I believe that both views are relevant, Impressive and extraordinary buildings are important for a city as they can resemble for that city and draw more attention to it. This can be considerably advantageous in different aspects. On the other hand, improving schools and hospitals should also be considered as an option to spend money on, because it can highly improve living conditions for people, especially children.
The
government
has always been dealing with the problem of spending the budget of a country or a city on a right issue, since the amount of the budget
is limited
. Although
some
people
may argue that the money should
be spent
on enhancing educational systems and healthcare
centres
, others may
believe
that the money should
be spent
on constructing impressive
buildings
which are
important
for a city.
As mentioned,
some
people
believe
that impressive
buildings
are
important
for a city. I
agree
with that to
some
degree. Considering diverse materials and technologies
used
for constructing such a
building
, altogether with the implemented architecture, it will
eventually
become a symbol of that city. If that
building
is successful in drawing attention to itself, more and more
people
would want to visit the city, leading to the improvement of the economy of the city.
However
, I
strongly
believe
that schools and hospitals should not put aside and
governments
should pay close attention to
improve
them too.
Improved
schools mean that more children can receive a proper education and in my opinion it is a farsighted investment.
Similarly
,
people
will benefit from
improved
hospitals and healthcare
centres
as more
people
would have access to these places and
less
people
would suffer from diseases.
In conclusion
, I
believe
that both views are relevant, Impressive and extraordinary
buildings
are
important
for a city as they can resemble for that city and draw more attention to it. This can be
considerably
advantageous in
different
aspects.
On the other hand
, improving schools and hospitals should
also
be considered
as an option to spend money on,
because
it can
highly
improve
living conditions for
people
,
especially
children.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes