Sport is said to be one of the most important educational activities in order to teach how to behave in our lives and in our society in general. It teaches how to be competitive and it helps to grow up children and teenagers in order to become young and adult people able to practice sports both as a passion or a professional job. It also trains how to control emotions, mental and physical dimensions of the individuals. If we talk about single sports, we can observe the level of this kind of control in a sportive during a show or an olympiad, or a competition. Therefore in a team sport, sometimes this control is more difficult, mainly during a severe competition. We talk for example about the fair play that is so spread, particularly in team sports, for example football. During important competitions, when the winners so involving, we could assist to some footballers misbehaviours due to both the anxious or the nervous attitude of someone. When people observe what happens, get in some bad and nervous cries and behaviours and the example of sportsmen or sportswomen is very negative. So I can't agree that even if sportive can play well, they have to maintain a right Fairplay and the best control they could. I should remember that when people watch their attitudes and behaviour, they judge and take as a model their own sportive idol. In conclusion. I believe that playing well is also so important as long as they have a fine and professional behaviour.
Sport
is said
to be one of the most
important
educational activities in order to teach how to behave in our
lives
and in our society
in general
. It teaches how to be competitive and it
helps
to grow up children and
teenagers
in order to become young and adult
people
able to practice
sports
both as a passion or a professional job. It
also
trains how to
control
emotions, mental and physical dimensions of the individuals. If we talk about single
sports
, we can observe the level of this kind of
control
in a sportive during a
show
or an
olympiad
, or a competition.
Therefore
in a team
sport
,
sometimes
this
control
is more difficult,
mainly
during a severe competition. We talk
for example
about the
fair
play
that is
so
spread,
particularly
in team
sports
,
for example
football. During
important
competitions, when the winners
so
involving, we could assist to
some
footballers
misbehaviours
due to both the anxious or the nervous attitude of someone. When
people
observe what happens,
get
in
some
bad
and nervous cries and
behaviours
and the example of sportsmen or sportswomen is
very
negative
.
So
I can't
agree
that even if sportive can play well, they
have to
maintain a right
Fairplay
and the best
control
they could. I should remember that when
people
watch
their attitudes and
behaviour
, they judge and take as a model their
own
sportive idol.
In conclusion
. I believe that playing well is
also
so
important
as long as they have a fine and professional
behaviour
.
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