Although paid work is thought by some to be a useful experience for children, other people consider that it can be detrimental. Children can learn about earning money and gain independence from doing paid work but there are also drawbacks to be taken into account.
Primarily, the most important benefit for children doing paid work is that they understand the value of money. This also teaches them not to waste money as they realise the work needed to earn it. Secondly, having a paid job is advantageous because children take their first steps in learning how to manage and save money. Many older children, for instance, have a part time job in order to save up for something they would otherwise be unable to afford. Thirdly, working teaches children responsibility and independence. These skills help children to develop into self-supporting adults ready to enter society and the work force.
On the other hand, one problem when children have a job is that it potentially exposes them to exploitation through slave labour. For example, in some developing countries children are made to work full time but due to their age are not protected by law. As a result, they are paid negligible wages for work that can be tough, manual work. Another possible issue is that the time children spend working prevents them from focusing on their school work. Having a good education is the key to a successful future so being employed as a child can result in a poor academic performance which can be harmful in the long run.
In conclusion, while children can benefit from some work experience, it can also lead to exploitation or lower grades at school.
Although
paid
work
is
thought
by
some
to be a useful experience for
children
, other
people
consider that it can be detrimental.
Children
can learn about earning
money
and gain independence from doing
paid
work
but
there are
also
drawbacks to
be taken
into account.
Primarily
, the most
important
benefit for
children
doing
paid
work
is that they understand the value of
money
. This
also
teaches them not to waste
money
as they
realise
the
work
needed to earn it.
Secondly
, having a
paid
job is advantageous
because
children
take their
first
steps in learning how to manage and save
money
.
Many
older
children
,
for instance
, have a
part time
job in order to save up for something they would
otherwise
be unable to afford.
Thirdly
, working teaches
children
responsibility and independence. These
skills
help
children
to develop into self-supporting adults ready to enter society and the
work
force.
On the other hand
, one problem when
children
have a job is that it
potentially
exposes them to exploitation through slave
labour
.
For example
, in
some
developing countries
children
are made
to
work
full time
but
due to their age are not protected by law.
As a result
, they are
paid
negligible wages for
work
that can be tough, manual
work
. Another possible issue is that the time
children
spend working
prevents
them from focusing on their school
work
. Having a
good
education is the key to a successful future
so
being employed
as a child can result in a poor academic performance which can be harmful in the long run.
In conclusion
, while
children
can benefit from
some
work
experience, it can
also
lead to exploitation or lower grades at school.
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