It is considering, that whether the young generations should be allowed to work to earn money, or would this attitude have a negative impact on their lives. I tend to believe that, while having a paid job may have its own benefits, but the drawbacks of it will overcome them.
To start with the positives of making money through working, one of the main benefits of that is likely to become more financially independent. This is because, more and more money children will earn, then less and less stuff they will ask for their parents to buy. For example, if a teenager starts to receive one hundred dollars weekly, he or she will be able to cover some of his or her expenses without receiving financial support from their family members. As a result of this, children may be better prepared for the job market in terms of freedom to make a choice and realize its consequence.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of this choice, such as possible distructions for children in successing at their studies at school and other negative impacts on their future. In other words, in spite of the possible benefits from having paid work, it may distract pupils from doing homework, as there will be less time for preparing it. Thus, if young people do not tend to dedicate themselves for studies due to lack of time, they will be less-educated and mostly not be hired for senior postions in the future.
To conclude, although earning money may bring some feeling of independence in terms of finance for children, it will likely to interrupt their learning process and be an obstacle for them for receiving managerial jobs in the future.
It is considering, that whether the young generations should be
allowed
to work to earn
money
, or would this attitude have a
negative
impact on their
lives
. I tend to believe that, while having a paid job may have its
own
benefits,
but
the drawbacks of it will overcome them.
To
start
with the positives of making
money
through working, one of the main benefits of
that is
likely to become more
financially
independent. This is
because
, more and more
money
children
will earn, then less and less stuff they will
ask for
their parents to
buy
.
For example
, if a
teenager
starts
to receive one hundred dollars weekly, he or she will be able to cover
some
of
his or her
expenses without receiving financial support from their family members.
As a result
of this,
children
may be better prepared for the job market in terms of freedom to
make
a choice and realize its consequence.
On the other hand
, there are
some
disadvantages of this choice, such as possible
distructions
for
children
in
successing
at their studies at school and other
negative
impacts on their future.
In other words
,
in spite of
the possible benefits from having paid work, it may distract pupils from doing homework, as there will be less time for preparing it.
Thus
, if young
people
do not tend to dedicate themselves for studies due to lack of time, they will be less-educated and
mostly
not
be hired
for senior
postions
in the future.
To conclude
, although earning
money
may bring
some
feeling of independence in terms of finance for
children
, it will likely to interrupt their learning process and be an obstacle for them for receiving managerial jobs in the future.