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Some people think that instead of preventing the climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people think that instead of preventing the climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 1
Climate change is one of the most alarming issues throughout the world. People had started thinking that instead of preventing the climate change, it's high time to find a way to live with it. I here agree with the fact that there is not time in still taking preventive actions. We instead start to face it and overcome it in day to day life One key point is that preventing is something which needs to be done before something occurs, but we are at the stage where it had already crossed the limit. There are many who campaigns for changing our lifestyle which will help out with climate change. For an example, people are asked to switch from fuel to electric vehicles. But then it is not going to make any change that easily, in sometime resources to get electricity is also going to be difficult. Another is that, evolution is a natural process and we are being evolved since our existence to adapt for our survival. Many around the world work for climate change and fighting against it. But, is it worth making the effort as this is no way going to solve the problem. Thus, instead of wasting time and money to find a solution or to prevent the climate change which has already occurred. We should start living with it. As discussed above, without further waiting for a solution, it is high time for us to act on it and to align with the evolution happening around. There is no wrong in living the way it is. The future is anyway a question mark, which cannot be predicted. Therefore, we should start adapting and survive.
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Climate
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change
is one of the most alarming issues throughout the world.
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People
had
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started
thinking that
instead
of preventing the
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climate
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change
, it's high
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time
to find a way to
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live
with it. I here
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agree with the fact that
there is not
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time
in
still
taking preventive actions. We
instead
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start
to face it and overcome it in day to day
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life


One key point is that preventing is something which needs to
be done
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before
something occurs,
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but
we are at the stage where it had already crossed the limit. There are
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many
who campaigns for changing our lifestyle which will
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help
out with
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climate
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change
. For an example,
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people
are asked
to switch from fuel to electric vehicles.
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But
then it is not going to
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make
any
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change
that
easily
, in sometime resources to
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get
electricity is
also
going to be difficult.

Another is that, evolution is a natural
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process and
we are
being evolved
since our existence to adapt for our survival.
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Many
around the world work for
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climate
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change
and fighting against it.
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But
, is it worth making the effort as this is no way going to solve the problem.
Thus
,
instead
of wasting
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time
and money to find a solution or to
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prevent
the
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climate
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change
which has already occurred. We should
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start
living with it.

As discussed above, without
further
waiting for a solution, it is high
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time
for us to act on it and to align with the evolution happening around. There is no
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wrong
in living the way it is. The future is anyway a question mark, which cannot
be predicted
.
Therefore
, we should
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start
adapting and survive.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing the climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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