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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.4

The transformation of climate pattern on the global scale has, for a long time, become a nerve-wracking issue for not only governments but also each citizens living on this planet. Then, several people these days hold the belief that humanity should live cooperatively with climate change rather than counteracting this phenomenon. From my perspective, while learning to live with the climate crisis is irrefutably vital, actions should be taken to prevent it from worsening as well. To initiate, there is a variety of supporting evidence that people should find a way to endure climate change. One fundamental justification is that the alteration of climate has already taken place. As a consequence of various different human activities that seriously damaged the environment, climate change resulted in global warming or melting ice has happened over the last few decades. Therefore, people need to resign to the fact that if they cannot adjust themselves to it, this worrisome environmental deterioration can be very detrimental to their physical and mental well-being. By the way of exemplifying, the escalating of global temperature lead to citizens in many countries are advised to wear a long coat whenever going out in order to diminish the disastrous impacts of ultraviolet ray from the sun. Nevertheless, measures to prevent or at least mitigate climate change should not be underestimated. It does not unreasonable to suggest that even though people cannot stop climate change from arising in the first place if they turn a blind eye to this imminent problem then somedays climate change will make planet Earth inhabitable. Then, the worse scenario will be living with climate change is no longer possible. Furthermore, climate change may be illustrated through various phenomena, hence many of them may not yet arrive, thereby preventing them right from the start is probably possible. Due to these aforementioned explanations, I believe that learning how to live with climate change is essential for people's well being. Nonetheless, finding ways to prevent it should also be taken into consideration for good.
The transformation of
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pattern on the global scale has, for a long time, become a nerve-wracking issue for not
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governments
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living on this planet. Then, several
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people
these days hold the belief that humanity should
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live
cooperatively
with
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rather
than counteracting this phenomenon. From my perspective, while learning to
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live
with the
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crisis is
irrefutably
vital, actions should
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to
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prevent
it from worsening
as well
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To initiate, there is a variety of supporting evidence that
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people
should find a way to endure
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climate
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change
. One fundamental justification is that the alteration of
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climate
has already taken place. As a consequence of various
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different
human activities that
seriously
damaged the environment,
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climate
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change
resulted in global warming or melting ice has happened over the last few decades.
Therefore
,
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people
need to resign to the fact that if they cannot adjust themselves to it, this worrisome environmental deterioration can be
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very
detrimental to their physical and mental well-being. By the way of exemplifying, the escalating of global temperature lead to citizens in
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many
countries
are advised
to wear a long coat whenever going out in order to diminish the disastrous impacts of ultraviolet ray from the sun.

Nevertheless
, measures to
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prevent
or at least mitigate
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climate
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change
should not
be underestimated
. It does not unreasonable to suggest that
even though
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people
cannot
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stop
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climate
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from arising in the
first
place if they turn a blind eye to this imminent problem then
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somedays
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will
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make
planet Earth inhabitable. Then, the worse scenario will be living with
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climate
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change
is no longer possible.
Furthermore
,
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may
be illustrated
through various phenomena,
hence
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many
of them may not
yet
arrive, thereby preventing them right from the
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start
is
probably
possible.

Due to these aforementioned explanations, I believe that learning how to
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live
with
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is essential for
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well being
. Nonetheless, finding ways to
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it should
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into consideration for
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
335 words
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