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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your experience or knowledge. v.6

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 6
Nowadays climate change is one of the main problems of the earth. A portion of people think that we should find a alternative. But I think we need to resolve this problem. This essey will discuss the disagreement of the above statement. Some folks think we should go for another option instead of preventing climate change they feel this way because, they are not taking this issue seriously. For instance, a recent study done by a environmental not for profit organization found that a smll village of North India was abandoned by the natives due to water crisis. In addition, still people are not taking this problem seriously. People of the third world countries are concentrate more on food and housing as primary concern. Unemployment rate is increasing gradully in the whole world. An internation humanitarian organization The Earth have found in their six months long survey that due to crisis in the middle east and economic slowdown in India people faced unemployement. That's why people are more focusing on their earning instead of environment protection. On the other hand, some people think that migration to develop countries like UK, US, Canada is a solution. The main problem is that majority of people think about their own instead of whole world. Moreover, there are very less climate change awareness campaigns done globally. People love to speard awareness through social media. During amazon forest burning people were protesting by social media but the number of ground protests in Brazil were very less. To conclude, people need to be more serious about climate change as it affects everying of our life. We must speard more awareness across the globe. There is no other option to avoid this challenge.
Nowadays
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climate
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change
is one of the main
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problems
of the earth. A portion of
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people
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think
that we should find
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a
alternative.
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But
I
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think
we need to resolve this
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problem
. This
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essey
will discuss the disagreement of the above statement.

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Some
folks
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think
we should go for another option
instead
of preventing
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climate
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change
they feel this way
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because
, they are not taking this issue
seriously
.
For instance
, a recent study done by
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a
environmental not for profit organization found that a
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smll
village of North India
was abandoned
by the natives due to water crisis.
In addition
,
still
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people
are not taking this
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problem
seriously
.
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People
of the third world countries are concentrate more on food and housing as primary concern. Unemployment rate is increasing
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gradully
in the whole world. An internation humanitarian organization The Earth have found in their six months long survey that due to crisis in the
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middle east
and economic slowdown in India
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people
faced
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unemployement
. That's why
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people
are more focusing on their earning
instead
of environment protection.

On the other hand
,
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some
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people
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think
that migration to develop countries like UK, US, Canada is a solution. The main
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problem
is that majority of
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people
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think
about their
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own
instead
of whole world.
Moreover
, there are
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very
less
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climate
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change
awareness campaigns done globally.
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People
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love
to
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speard
awareness through social media. During
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amazon
forest burning
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people
were protesting by social media
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but
the number of ground protests in Brazil were
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very
less.

To conclude
,
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people
need to be more serious about
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climate
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change
as it affects
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everying
of our life. We
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must
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speard
more awareness across the globe. There is no other option to avoid this challenge.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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