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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.11

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 11
Climate change is one of the most essential topics in today’s world. Accordingly, there are many approaches in order to solve this massive problem. While there are some people who considers climate change as something humans can cope with, others give it extreme importance and look for powerful solutions. I strongly believe that climate change is something to be dealt with. For that reason, we must take individual actions and force governments to act in accordance with climate change precautions. First and foremost, I must state that raising awareness and commencing individual action constitutes the most effective part considering the prevention of climate change. Individual action brings a cumulative organization with it. To illustrate, decreasing the frequency of using automobiles and aircraft makes a considerable change in terms of the continuing process of climate change. Second, after taking individual action, people must cajole governments into taking relevant measures for the sake of climate change matters. All around the world, governments are initiating and managing investments with a plethora of other governments or private companies in order to maintain economic development. However, the irresponsible behaviour of politicians in monetary terms harms the future of young generations. Therefore, people must force governments not to make investments in fossil fuel and sectors that cause high carbon emissions. In conclusion, the tendency of living with climate change and not trying to stop its negative effects in the environment should never be the policy of any country. Instead, everybody must comply with the rules and regulations set forth under respected institutions and non-governmental organizations for avoiding climate change. By taking individual steps and pressuring governments, we can get positive results and leave a clean and viable earth for the next generations.
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Climate
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is one of the most essential topics in
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today
’s world.
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many
approaches in order to solve this massive problem. While there are
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some
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people
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considers
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climate
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change
as something humans can cope with, others give it extreme importance and look for powerful solutions. I
strongly
believe that
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climate
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change
is something to
be dealt
with. For that reason, we
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must
take
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individual
actions and force
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governments
to act in accordance with
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climate
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change
precautions.

First
and foremost, I
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must
state that raising awareness and commencing
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individual
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action
constitutes the most effective part considering the prevention of
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climate
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change
.
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Individual
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action
brings a cumulative organization with it. To illustrate, decreasing the frequency of using automobiles and aircraft
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makes
a considerable
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change
in terms of the continuing process of
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climate
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change
.

Second, after taking
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individual
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action
,
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people
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must
cajole
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governments
into taking relevant measures for the sake of
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climate
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change
matters. All around the world,
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governments
are initiating and managing investments with a plethora of other
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governments
or private
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companies
in order to maintain economic development.
However
, the irresponsible
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behaviour
of politicians in monetary terms harms the future of young generations.
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,
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people
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force
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governments
not to
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make
investments in fossil fuel and sectors that cause high carbon emissions.

In conclusion
, the tendency of living with
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climate
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change
and not trying to
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stop
its
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negative
effects in the environment should never be the policy of any country.
Instead
, everybody
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must
comply with the
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rules
and regulations set forth under respected institutions and non-governmental organizations for avoiding
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climate
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change
. By taking
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individual
steps and pressuring
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governments
, we can
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get
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positive
results and
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leave
a clean and viable earth for the
next
generations.
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 11

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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