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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.19

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 19
The increasing attention concerning that global warming has becoming a common situation in the earth. However, one opinion indicates that the better solution is getting use to it. I totally disagree with this idea; there are two reasons to support my idea. Firstly, the history of the earth has already proved that the climate changing could destroy a civilization. For instance, dinosaur became extinct in the ancient time because of they did not have any methods to predict the global disaster which is caused by climate changing. According the research, global warming could led to a sort of negative consequences, such as rising sea level and broken biological chain. Thus, we should never ignore that how our environment is important. Another consideration in this case is that human being is the main responsibility taker of the global warming compare with other lives in this world. In many nations, the local government concentrated on developing the economy, people think establishing many industries is more important than protection of environment. As result, it led the serious carbon dioxide emission happened, and amount of animals lost their habitats even some species are facing the threat of extinct. Hence, we should clearly recognize that we should take the responsibility of protection of our planet instead of doing nothing, then we can make up those mistakes we have made. In conclusion, as the most powerful lives in this world, we do have the ability to figure out this issue. We should reflect on our selves and to learn that how to have coexistence with nature.
The increasing attention concerning that
global
warming has becoming a common situation in the earth.
However
, one opinion indicates that the better solution is getting
use
to it. I
totally
disagree with this
idea
; there are two reasons to support my
idea
.

Firstly
, the history of the earth has already proved that the climate changing could
destroy
a civilization.
For instance
, dinosaur became extinct in the ancient time
because of they
did not have any methods to predict the
global
disaster which
is caused
by climate changing.
According the
research,
global
warming could
led
to a sort of
negative
consequences, such as rising sea level and broken biological chain.
Thus
, we should never
ignore
that how our environment is
important
.

Another consideration
in this case
is that human being is the main responsibility taker of the
global
warming compare with other
lives
in this world. In
many
nations, the local
government
concentrated on developing the economy,
people
think
establishing
many
industries is more
important
than protection of environment. As result, it led the serious carbon dioxide emission happened, and amount of animals lost their habitats even
some
species are facing the threat of extinct.
Hence
, we should
clearly
recognize that we should take the responsibility of protection of our planet
instead
of doing nothing, then we can
make
up those mistakes we have made.

In conclusion
, as the most powerful
lives
in this world, we do have the ability to figure out this issue. We should reflect on our selves and to learn that how to have coexistence with nature.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 19

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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