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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.10

It is irrefutable that nowadays due to unsuitable human activities, environment has significantly affecting which result variations in climate. A section of society believe that one should search out some alternatives to live smoothly with such environmental conditions rather than preventing from them. I am firmly with this notion and a number of reasons surround my opinion. To embark on, the major benefits to adapting this phenomenon is that individuals will enable to keep continuity in their personal as well as professional life without facing any obstacles. They can be able to handle natural changes so they will not bother the condition. Hence, it will definitely not be affecting their work-family balance. Moreover, if they will be successful to find method to survive with unfamiliar natural condition, they will become stronger as they will have ability to fight against such changes. As a result, they will establish healthy society. To exemplify, earlier in 2020, owing to Covid, everything had affected alot starting from children's education to economy of the nation, but with the passage of time, everyone started to live with this worse situation, and they find another ways to continue their routine either it was study or it was their work. Now, almost all people have familiar how they can keep themselves safe. As a consequent, they applied some methods such as keep appropriate distance, wearing masks, using sanitizer, avoiding crowed places. Thus, with this, they are enabled to perform not only their daily routine, but also do their essential task. In conclusion, I would reiterate that although people need to prevent themselves from some harmful changes in nature, but they should definitely find some techniques to handle these changes which will be beneficial in the long run because they will live their life without being depressive.
It is irrefutable that nowadays due to unsuitable human activities, environment has
significantly
affecting which result variations in climate. A section of society believe that one should search out
some
alternatives to
live
smoothly
with such environmental conditions
rather
than preventing from them. I am
firmly
with this notion and a number of reasons surround my opinion.

To embark on, the major benefits to adapting this phenomenon is that individuals will enable to
keep
continuity in their personal
as well
as professional life without facing any obstacles. They can be able to handle natural
changes
so
they will not bother the condition.
Hence
, it will definitely not be affecting their work-family balance.
Moreover
, if they will be successful to find method to survive with unfamiliar natural condition, they will become stronger
as
they will have ability to fight against such
changes
.
As a result
, they will establish healthy society.

To exemplify, earlier in 2020, owing to
Covid
, everything had
affected
alot
starting from children's education to economy of the nation,
but
with the passage of time, everyone
started
to
live
with this worse situation, and they find another ways to continue their routine either it was study or it was their work.
Now
, almost all
people
have familiar how they can
keep
themselves safe. As a consequent, they applied
some
methods such as
keep
appropriate distance, wearing masks, using sanitizer, avoiding crowed places.
Thus
, with this, they
are enabled
to perform not
only
their daily routine,
but
also
do their essential task.

In conclusion
, I would reiterate that although
people
need to
prevent
themselves from
some
harmful
changes
in nature,
but
they should definitely find
some
techniques to handle these
changes
which will be beneficial in the long run
because
they will
live
their life without being depressive.
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.

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  American English
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298 words
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