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Some people think that instead of climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree v.2

Some people think that instead of climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 2
Weather is big factor while deciding to live in particular nation. People always look for very conducive environment for for healthy living. In the today scenario where weather is changing very rapidly and becoming very perilous. Survival is very tough in this environment. This essay will describe whether preventive actions should be taken or measures to live in this environment and agreement and disagreement to this statement. essay will also put light on personal view to this subject. Climate is very vulnerable now and becoming a big predicament. So endeavours must be made to make survival possible. To begin with, person should focus on healthy living. A man who does daily exercise, and intake healthy diet he remains fit whatever may the climate. This is the best example as many people live together in same time of environment but some persons fall less sic because they are much concerned with diet and healthy living. Recently a survey has been conducted and analysed that 60% people are more healthy in same climate due to their healthy habits. Further we must focus on more controllable factors. To elaborate it, one should focus to cleanness of surroundings as it will in avoiding the harmful effect. For instance aforestation and CNG driven vehicles should be promoted. Although all these measures will not change the climate and undoubtedly prove effective for lessoning effect of weather change On the flip side, i am very concerned that it is impossible to change the climate. plethora of factors are behind it. It is not the efforts of individuals that can make difference but also the government who has to do mass basis. It seems tough or a big question mark on the subject of climate change. So i put my strongest view that we must join hands and fight with this predicament and rather we must make this planet conducive to live inspite of such radiant climate change
Weather is
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factor while deciding to
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nation.
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always look for
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very
conducive
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environment
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for for
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healthy
living. In the
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today
scenario where weather is changing
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rapidly
and becoming
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perilous. Survival is
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very
tough in this
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environment
. This essay will
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describe
whether preventive actions should
be taken
or measures to
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live
in this
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environment
and agreement and disagreement to this statement.
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essay
will
also
put light on personal view to this subject.

Climate is
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vulnerable
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now
and becoming a
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predicament.
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So
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endeavours
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be made
to
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survival possible. To
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begin
with, person should focus on
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healthy
living. A
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man
who does daily exercise, and intake
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healthy
diet he remains fit whatever may the
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climate
. This is the best example as
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many
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people
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live
together in same time of
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environment
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but
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some
persons fall less sic
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because
they are much concerned with diet and
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healthy
living. Recently a survey has
been conducted
and
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analysed
that 60%
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people
are more
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healthy
in same
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climate
due to their
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healthy
habits.
Further
we
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must
focus on more controllable factors. To elaborate it, one should focus to cleanness of surroundings as it will in avoiding the harmful effect.
For instance
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aforestation
and CNG driven vehicles should
be promoted
. Although all these measures will not
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change
the
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climate
and
undoubtedly
prove effective for
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lessoning
effect of weather
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change


On the flip side,
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am
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concerned that it is impossible to
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the
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climate
.
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plethora
of factors are behind it. It is not the efforts of individuals that can
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make
difference
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also
the
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government
who
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has to
do mass basis. It seems tough or a
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big
question mark on the subject of
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climate
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change
.

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So
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put my strongest view that we
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must
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join
hands and fight with this predicament and
rather
we
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must
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make
this planet conducive to
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live
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inspite
of such radiant
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climate
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6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that instead of climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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