Many people believe that fixing the age limit for retirement at 65 without considering the nature of their occupation is a rude policy. They argue that exception should be given to certain occupations which involve physical and emotional stress. I agree with them.
A good reason to lower the age limit for retirement is that it eases the stress and pain of elderly people who are involved in hard physical labour. Generally speaking there is a lot of pressure in the working environment like achieving the month end targets. In order to meet these targets they are forced to work for longer hours which may not possible at their age. Another point to consider is that they may have lost their strength as they have been working for 25 to 30 years.
Due to this they may not be able to work as efficiently as they did in the past. Finally, it is essential for all people to stay fit and healthy. Elder people are more likely to fall ill than others. This is because they have a weak immune system. That is the reason doctors advise their elderly patients to stop working at a certain age.
Employees working in certain sectors will benefit from early retirement. For example, drivers should retire early. For driving we need more concentration throughout the work. So, people who crossed sixty might not be able to focus on their job for a long time. The same rule is applicable to air trafficking controllers, emergency rescue teams and people involved in mining activities.
To conclude, there are certain occupations which involve physical and emotional stress. So people working in these occupations should be provided the option of voluntary retirement if they think they are not fit.
Many
people
believe that fixing the age limit for
retirement
at 65 without considering the nature of their
occupation
is a rude policy. They argue that exception should be
given
to
certain
occupations
which involve physical and emotional
stress
. I
agree
with them.
A
good
reason to lower the age limit for
retirement
is that it
eases
the
stress
and pain of elderly
people
who
are involved
in
hard
physical
labour
.
Generally
speaking there is
a lot of
pressure in the
working
environment like achieving the month
end
targets. In order to
meet
these targets they
are forced
to work for longer hours which may not possible at their age. Another point to consider is that they may have lost their strength as they have been
working
for 25 to 30 years.
Due to this they may not be able to work as
efficiently
as they did in the past.
Finally
, it is essential for all
people
to stay fit and healthy. Elder
people
are more likely to fall ill than others. This is
because
they have a weak immune system.
That is
the reason doctors advise their elderly patients to
stop
working
at a
certain
age.
Employees
working
in
certain
sectors will benefit from early
retirement
.
For example
, drivers should retire early. For driving we need more concentration throughout the work.
So
,
people
who crossed sixty might not be able to focus on their job for a long time. The same
rule
is applicable to air trafficking controllers, emergency rescue teams and
people
involved in mining activities.
To conclude
, there are
certain
occupations
which involve physical and emotional
stress
.
So
people
working
in these
occupations
should
be provided
the option of voluntary
retirement
if they
think
they are not fit.
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