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Some people think that examinations should be eliminated. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people think that examinations should be eliminated. v. 1
It is a common practice for schools and colleges to have examinations to assess their students' knowledge. Although whether tests are essential or not is still controversial, I do believe that exams are of utmost importance to students. On the one hand, some people claim that exams encourage teaching to the test practice which means teaching a fixed curriculum focused on specific exams. This, as a result, leads to students' discomfort and limited proficiency about things not included in the exams. What's more, examinations have poor predictive quality because they only judge students' ability under set conditions and limited time. Assessing should be made through their daily performances at school as well as their attitude to studying. For example, many students who are very lazy at school still getting high results thanks to cheating while the good ones may perform less well due to anxiety. Besides, choosing exams as a way of judging the student's ability may put them under stress in order not to disappoint their parents and teachers. On the other hand, however, exams enable both schools and the students themselves to know the level of their studying. They provide regular feedback to acknowledge students about their shortcomings to work out and improve to get better. Secondly, competitive spirits are promoted through exams. If they want to have good performances, they will need to enrich their knowledge and push themselves harder. For example, to keep up with the peer and fulfilthemselves gives students thể incentive to try harder to get high scores. Finally, exams can be considered as a way of revision, requiring students to thoroughly understand and master at what they have learned. Without testing being compulsory, maybe the students will have no motivations as well as responsibility to expand their expertise. In conclusion, although assessing students' ability through different exams does bring some disadvantages, I personally feel that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks mentioned above.
It is a common practice for
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schools
and colleges to have examinations to assess their
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students'
knowledge. Although whether
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tests
are essential or not is
still
controversial, I do believe that exams are of utmost importance to students.

On the one hand,
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some
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people
claim that exams encourage teaching to the
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test
practice which means teaching a
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fixed
curriculum focused on specific exams. This,
as a result
, leads to
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students'
discomfort and limited proficiency about things not included in the exams. What's more, examinations have poor predictive quality
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because
they
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only
judge
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students'
ability under set conditions and limited time. Assessing should
be made
through their daily performances at
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school
as well
as their attitude to studying.
For example
,
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many
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students
who are
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very
lazy at
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school
still
getting high results thanks to cheating while the
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good
ones may perform less well due to anxiety.
Besides
, choosing exams as a way of judging the student's ability may put them under
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stress
in order not to disappoint their parents and teachers.

On the other hand
,
however
, exams enable both
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schools
and the
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students
themselves to know the level of their studying. They provide regular feedback to acknowledge
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students
about their shortcomings to work out and
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improve
to
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get
better.
Secondly
, competitive spirits
are promoted
through exams. If they want to have
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good
performances, they will need to enrich their knowledge and push themselves harder.
For example
, to
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keep
up with the peer and
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fulfilthemselves
gives
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students
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thể
incentive to try harder to
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get
high scores.
Finally
, exams can
be considered
as a way of revision, requiring
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students
to
thoroughly
understand and master at what they have learned. Without testing being compulsory, maybe the
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students
will have no motivations
as well
as responsibility to expand their expertise.

In conclusion
, although assessing
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students'
ability through
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different
exams does bring
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some
disadvantages, I
personally
feel that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks mentioned above.
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IELTS essay Some people think that examinations should be eliminated. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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