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Many people believe that formal 'pen and paper' examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations? v.4

Many people believe that formal 'pen and paper' examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations? v. 4
Educational tools and methods have significantly improved over the years. One of the educational aspects that still have arguments on is how to assess educational achievement. Many people insist that formal examinations are not the best method. In this essay, I will evaluate this approach, as well as other assessment techniques, and how combining them is the most efficient way of assessing. The first method of assessment is, as said, the formal examinations. These examinations are set at the end of the term to measure the educational achievement of students by answering questions and solving problems. Some of the advantages of this approach are assessing the academic skills of the students and their intellectual response to problems in a limited time. However, there are many drawbacks, such as providing only one chance for students to prove their abilities. Moreover, its assessment focuses more on memorizing information rather than learning and improving. Another assessment approach is through doing projects, seminars, and research. This method allows a great opportunity for self-learning and applying the knowledge the students acquire in real-life problems. Students would feel the connections with the subjects, which will improve the level of learning. As well as developing communication skills and working as a team. However, some difficulty could face the teacher in ensuring that each member participates. The third method is continuous assessment through the term. The teacher assesses how much each student understands and learns a specific skill or a topic of the subject. This approach allows the student to catch up with his/her colleagues, and for the teacher to determine the strengths and weaknesses of each student individually, to modify the teaching plan. But this technique could be applied only in small classrooms. Overall, each assessment method has its advantages and disadvantages, and that implies the efficient approach of combining between at least two of them. This could be an optimal solution to compensate for the weaknesses of each of them to improve the students learning experience.
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over the years. One of the
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aspects that
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educational
achievement.
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people
insist that formal examinations are not the best
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. In this essay, I will evaluate this
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approach
,
as well
as other
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assessment
techniques, and how combining them is the most efficient way of assessing.

The
first
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method
of
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assessment
is, as said, the formal examinations. These examinations
are set
at the
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end
of the term to measure the
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educational
achievement of
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students
by answering questions and solving problems.
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Some of the
advantages of this
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approach
are assessing the academic
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skills
of the
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students
and their intellectual response to problems in a limited time.
However
, there are
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many
drawbacks, such as providing
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only
one chance for
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students
to prove their abilities.
Moreover
, its
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assessment
focuses more on memorizing information
rather
than learning and improving.

Another
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assessment
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approach
is through doing projects, seminars, and research. This
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method
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allows
a great opportunity for self-learning and applying the knowledge the
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students
acquire in real-life problems.
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would feel the connections with the subjects, which will
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improve
the level of learning.
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as developing communication
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skills
and working as a team.
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,
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some
difficulty could face the teacher in ensuring that each member participates.

The third
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method
is continuous
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assessment
through the term. The teacher assesses how much each
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student
understands and learns a specific
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skill
or a topic of the subject. This
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approach
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allows
the
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student
to catch up with his/her colleagues, and for the teacher to determine the strengths and weaknesses of each
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student
individually
, to modify the teaching plan.
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be applied
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only
in
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small
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assessment
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method
has its advantages and disadvantages, and that implies the efficient
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approach
of combining between at least two of them. This could be an optimal solution to compensate for the weaknesses of each of them to
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improve
the
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students
learning experience.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that formal 'pen and paper' examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations? v. 4

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  American English
5 paragraphs
330 words
6.5
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