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Many people believe that formal ‘pen and paper’ examinations are not best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations? v.1

Many people believe that formal ‘pen and paper’ examinations are not best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations? v. 1
Pen and paper exams are one of the most common methods of measuring learning in schools around the world. However, whether they are the best approach to measure academic performance or not is still a controversial question. Personally, I think that the role of examinations should be reconsidered. On the one hand, there are certain advantages to exams. They are relatively versatile with different types of exam questions such as multiple-choice questions and essay tasks, which can test different sorts of ability. However, exams also have some drawbacks. Students who have good test-taking skills can perform well on exams without having to study hard to understand the subjects deeply. On the other hand, some test-takers do poorly in exams because of their anxiety. Besides, some teachers and leaners only focused on some aspects of the curriculum that are likely to be tested, thus narrowing the educational experience for all. A number of measures should be concerned to address these concerns. Exams should be match the content and activities of the learning environment. Exam tasks should be varied to five fair opportunities to candidates with different types of skills. Other types of assessment should be considered: writing assignment, for example, to assess independent learning and research skills, question and answer section to test communication skill, or group projects, to measure teamwork ability. In conclusion, exams clearly have an important role in the educational system but in the future, it should be associated with many other forms of assessment in order to truly measure academic performance.
Pen and paper exams are one of the most common methods of measuring learning in schools around the world.
However
, whether they are the best approach to
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measure
academic performance or not is
still
a controversial
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question
.
Personally
, I
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think
that the role of examinations should
be reconsidered
.

On the one hand, there are certain advantages to exams. They are
relatively
versatile with
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different
types of exam
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questions
such as multiple-choice
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questions
and essay tasks, which can
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test
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different
sorts of ability.
However
, exams
also
have
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some
drawbacks. Students who have
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good
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test
-taking
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skills
can perform well on exams without having to study
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hard
to understand the subjects
deeply
.
On the other hand
,
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some
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test
-takers do
poorly
in exams
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because
of their anxiety.
Besides
,
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some
teachers and
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leaners
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only
focused on
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some
aspects of the curriculum that are likely to be
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tested
,
thus
narrowing the educational experience for all.

A number of
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measures
should
be concerned
to address these concerns. Exams should be
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match
the content and activities of the learning environment. Exam tasks should
be varied
to five
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fair
opportunities to candidates with
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different
types of
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skills
. Other types of assessment should
be considered
: writing assignment,
for example
, to assess independent learning and research
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skills
,
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question
and answer section to
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test
communication
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skill
, or group projects, to
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measure
teamwork ability.

In conclusion
, exams
clearly
have an
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important
role in the educational system
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but
in the future, it should
be associated
with
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many
other forms of assessment in order to
truly
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measure
academic performance.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Many people believe that formal ‘pen and paper’ examinations are not best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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