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Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.2

Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. with this opinion? v. 2
These days, university education is benefit of all citizens in each country. So that, there are many mixed opinions around how government can ensure equality of education for everyone. One of the opinions is free tuition no matter what financial background they have. It might be a great solution, but I do not quite agree with it. In the current context, free tuition in university education is intent of governments, who always want that their citizens can have full access to education. On the other hand, no talent lost opportunity by lack of their economic conditions. A concrete example is that a long historical university education of Germany, which totally free for all students wanting to study in here. It results in Germany coming third in the rankings of destinations that foreign students wish to attend. However, as I see it, a large of countries have had to remit this education financing. The foremost cause of this issue is that their economy is not enough strong to uphold a large amount of annual fund. Finland, where is well-known totally free education for all inhabitants. In economic slump of Europe 2012, this country suddenly announced courses fee for foreign students in university. In fact, in 2014, Finland economic appeared signs of the decline. To sum up, I am of opinion that equity in education to all regardless of income is superb renovation. A development economic is extremely significant to make our future target be achieved, though.
These days,
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university
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education
is benefit of all citizens in each country.
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So
that, there are
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many
mixed opinions around how
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government
can ensure equality of
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education
for everyone. One of the opinions is
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free
tuition no matter what financial background they have. It might be a great solution,
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but
I do not quite
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agree
with it.

In the
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current
context,
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free
tuition in
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university
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education
is intent of
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governments
, who always want that their citizens can have full access to
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education
.
On the other hand
, no talent lost opportunity by lack of their
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economic
conditions. A concrete example is that a long historical
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university
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education
of Germany, which
totally
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free
for all students wanting to study in here. It results in Germany coming third in the rankings of destinations that foreign students wish to attend.

However
, as I
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see
it, a large of countries have had to remit this
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education
financing. The foremost cause of this issue is that their economy is not
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enough
strong to uphold a large amount of annual fund. Finland, where is well-known
totally
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free
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education
for all inhabitants. In
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economic
slump of Europe 2012, this country
suddenly
announced courses fee for foreign students in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
. In fact, in 2014, Finland
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economic
appeared signs of the decline.

To sum up, I am of opinion that equity in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
to all regardless of income is superb renovation. A development
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economic
is
extremely
significant to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
our future target
be achieved
, though.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS essay Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. with this opinion? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
245 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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