Cultural traditions can be defined as the lifestyle and language are inherited by people as well as the building and food become the features of life. In the pace with the advancement of technology, mankind can obtain more information about different cultural traditions or even travel the countries using the convenient transportation. However, some people support that traditions will be destroyed because of earning money from the tourists while others think that this is the only method to preserve the places.
First of all, it is undeniable that cultural traditions are changed significantly due to tourists. The behaviours of tourists are annoying such as littering, destruction towards artifacts and disrespect of culture, but the locals must be endured because of making the profits. The government also do not care this matter seriously and just give the warning, instead of practicing the punishment towards illegal tourists. Otherwise, some traditional food must be varied the ingredients because to match the taste of foreigners, causing tourists cannot realise the original cuisine and feel disappointed of being cheated.
From another aspect, tourism is aimed for some cultural traditions to survive until nowadays, for the locals know the uniqueness and preciousness of their cultures, so that they will share the cultural history and be proud of it. In addition, if the cultures are not learned by the young generation, it will disappear sooner without any man-made damage. It is obvious that traditions must be done repeatedly in life because to avoid the degeneration.
In conclusion, in order to let our later generation can realise various cultural traditions around the world, we must pay effort to protect and preserve our culture. With the cooperation of the government, the occurring of vandalism will be reduced effectively.
Cultural
traditions
can
be defined
as the lifestyle and language
are inherited
by
people
as well
as the building and food become the features of life. In the pace with the advancement of technology, mankind can obtain more information about
different
cultural
traditions
or even travel the countries using the convenient transportation.
However
,
some
people
support that
traditions
will be
destroyed
because
of earning money from the
tourists
while others
think
that this is the
only
method to preserve the places.
First of all
, it is undeniable that
cultural
traditions
are
changed
significantly
due to
tourists
. The
behaviours
of
tourists
are annoying such as littering, destruction towards artifacts and disrespect of
culture
,
but
the locals
must
be endured
because
of making the profits. The
government
also
do not care this matter
seriously
and
just
give the warning,
instead
of practicing the punishment towards illegal
tourists
.
Otherwise
,
some
traditional food
must
be varied
the ingredients
because
to match the taste of foreigners, causing
tourists
cannot
realise
the original cuisine and feel
disappointed of
being cheated
.
From another aspect, tourism
is aimed
for
some
cultural
traditions
to survive until nowadays, for the locals know the uniqueness and preciousness of their
cultures
,
so
that they will share the
cultural
history and be proud of it.
In addition
, if the
cultures
are not learned by the young generation, it will disappear sooner without any
man
-made damage. It is obvious that
traditions
must
be done
repeatedly
in life
because
to avoid the degeneration.
In conclusion
, in order to
let
our later generation can
realise
various
cultural
traditions
around the world, we
must
pay effort to protect and preserve our
culture
. With the cooperation of the
government
, the occurring of vandalism will be
reduced
effectively
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes