Although it is thought by some people that primary schooling for children should be started lately, others believe that the child should get admitted to school before he turn seven year old. In my opinion, I consider that early education helps in overall development and increase the chances of child's bright future.
On the one hand, some people think that children who start going to schools before turning seven often become more successful and I agree. Young children have sharp memory thus they learn things faster as compared to older children. In other words, such children can quickly adapt to school atmosphere and learn cooperating with others. Furthermore, early education will help them in completing the education at teenage. Therefore, they can enter into job market while they are still teens and can have competitive advantage over other candidates.
On the other hand, it is often believed that it is better to send any children to school only when he crosses seven years of age. As young children find it hard to stay away from parents thus, they may feel underconfident in outer world and face difficulties with learning process. Another reason why late admission is suggested that some children might not like leaving the home and parents, therefore they sometime can develop a disliking for schools. If a young child start hating school, then it may result in poor academic performance in future.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that children stand a better chance to succeed both in school and later in life if they start the primary schooling in early years.
Although it is
thought
by
some
people
that primary schooling for
children
should be
started
lately, others believe that the child should
get
admitted to
school
before
he
turn
seven year
old
. In my opinion, I consider that early education
helps
in
overall
development and increase the chances of child's bright future.
On the one hand,
some
people
think
that
children
who
start
going to
schools
before
turning seven
often
become more successful and I
agree
. Young
children
have sharp memory
thus
they learn things faster as compared to older
children
. In
other
words, such
children
can
quickly
adapt to
school
atmosphere and learn
cooperating
with others.
Furthermore
, early education will
help
them in completing the education at teenage.
Therefore
, they can enter into job market while they are
still
teens and can have competitive advantage over
other
candidates.
On the
other
hand, it is
often
believed that it is better to
send
any
children
to
school
only
when he crosses seven years of age. As young
children
find it
hard
to stay away from parents
thus
, they may feel
underconfident
in outer world and face difficulties with learning process. Another reason why late admission
is suggested
that
some
children
might not like leaving the home and parents,
therefore
they sometime can develop a disliking for
schools
. If a young child
start
hating
school
, then it may result in poor academic performance
in future
.
In conclusion
, while
people
may vary in their opinions, I
think
that
children
stand a better chance to succeed both in
school
and later in life if they
start
the primary schooling in early years.
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