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Some people says we should use free space in town and city for plantation a d some says that it should be used for construction. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people says we should use free space in town and city for plantation a d some says that it should be used for construction. v. 1
It is very crucial to plant more and more trees in order to protect our environment. Two groups of people argue that free plots in the city and town should be used to seedling trees or some people says that housing facilities should be build instead. In my opinion, greenery is significant for the betterment of atmosphere. My opinion is outlined in this essay. One good reason for plantation is to combat with global warming. In this modern world, industrialization is increasing day by day which ultimately lead to pollution because they release poisonous gasses into air. Moreover people use vehicles even to go to nearby places these vehicles with fuel, also release carbon dioxide in air. Finally, these poisonous gasses effect can be reduced by oxygen which absorbs all the pollutants from air, oxygen released by trees. So trees plays an important role in providing us fresh and pure environment. Another good reason for plantation is, they provide edibles. Even the leaves of some plants are full of nutrients and forest provide us fruits and vegetables. Humans also depend on forest for wood for many purposes like furniture. For instance, comodia is country, where 52% of total land used for forest. Due to which life of people over there is great. In addition to this, forests are natural habitat for the animals and birds and they also depend on trees for their food. In conclusion, it is really important to plant trees instead of building new homes. It plays significant role to reduce global warming and provide dietary benefits.
It is
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crucial to plant more and more
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trees
in order to protect our environment. Two groups of
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people
argue that free plots in the city and town should be
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used
to seedling
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trees
or
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some
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people
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says
that housing facilities should be build
instead
. In my opinion, greenery is significant for the betterment of atmosphere. My opinion
is outlined
in this essay.

One
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good
reason for plantation is to combat with global warming. In this modern world, industrialization is increasing day by day which
ultimately
lead to pollution
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because
they release poisonous gasses into air.
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Moreover
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people
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use
vehicles even to go to nearby places these vehicles with fuel,
also
release carbon dioxide in air.
Finally
, these poisonous gasses effect can be
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reduced
by oxygen which absorbs all the pollutants from air, oxygen released by
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trees
.
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So
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trees
plays an
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important
role in providing us fresh and pure environment.

Another
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good
reason for plantation is, they provide edibles. Even the
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leaves
of
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some
plants are full of nutrients and
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forest
provide us fruits and vegetables. Humans
also
depend on
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forest
for wood for
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many
purposes like furniture.
For instance
,
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comodia
is country, where 52% of total land
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used
for
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forest
. Due to which life of
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people
over there is great.
In addition
to this,
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forests
are natural habitat for the animals and
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birds and
they
also
depend on
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trees
for their food.

In conclusion
, it is
really
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important
to plant
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trees
instead
of building new homes. It plays significant role to
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reduce
global warming and provide dietary benefits.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people says we should use free space in town and city for plantation a d some says that it should be used for construction. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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