Nowadays, travelling through cars is becoming increasingly popular. It can be beneficial in many ways. It can reduce the time and distance, but some people prefer the use of bicycles. They believe that the bicycle can reduce pollution and keep their body in exercise. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the arguments and draw a conclusion.
First of all, by the change of technology, the means of transportation have been changed over the past years. One of the main changes is travelling through motors. The cars have become an important part of our lives. We can cover distance of miles in a few hours and minutes. For example, if we want to do grocery from a faraway supermarket in the city in Pakistan. We just reach there in a couple of minutes through car and put vegetables and other heavy stuff into the vehicle and reach back to home in no time. In this way, these cars have made our life simpler.
On the other hand, there is a common belief that the use of bicycles positively affects our health and environment. People think that they can prevent pollution and overcrowding by the use of bicycles. In Europe, for instance, people are encouraged to take cycle rides in order to make less pollution. And people can do it as a sport to maintain their health.
In conclusion, although it a common thought that travelling through cars is more convenient. I believe that bicycles are still in fashion. Personally, I think that bicycles are more effective way of transportation in a city as it's environmentally friendly.
Nowadays, travelling
through
cars
is becoming
increasingly
popular. It can be beneficial in
many
ways. It can
reduce
the time and distance,
but
some
people
prefer the
use
of
bicycles
. They believe that the
bicycle
can
reduce
pollution and
keep
their body in exercise. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the arguments and draw a conclusion.
First of all
, by the
change
of technology, the means of transportation have been
changed
over the past years. One of the main
changes
is travelling
through
motors. The
cars
have become an
important
part of our
lives
. We can cover distance of miles in a few hours and minutes.
For example
, if we want to do grocery from a faraway supermarket in the city in Pakistan. We
just
reach there in a couple of minutes
through
car
and put vegetables and other heavy stuff into the vehicle and reach back to home in no time. In this way, these
cars
have made our life simpler.
On the other hand
, there is a common belief that the
use
of
bicycles
positively
affects our health and environment.
People
think
that they can
prevent
pollution and overcrowding by the
use
of
bicycles
. In Europe,
for instance
,
people
are encouraged
to take cycle rides in order to
make
less pollution. And
people
can do it as a sport to maintain their health.
In conclusion
, although
it
a common
thought
that travelling
through
cars
is more convenient. I believe that
bicycles
are
still
in fashion.
Personally
, I
think
that
bicycles
are more effective way of transportation in a city as it's
environmentally
friendly.
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